Oof, left a bad taste in my mouth.
This may be a case of too much world-building for a short story, cant enjoy it since I know what I know now
Huh. Well. Sure okay, why not? ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Porn no plot.
Dead dove - LOTS of non-con and super specific fetishes.
Was about to reread this one and then I saw that “sad” was the one of the tags I put and i’m like OK… still gonna reread it. But now I’m ready. Mentally prepared
Lol did anyone else notice they changed the color of the brothers nipples from the first time
From brown to cherry reddish lol…just because he is abt’ to change from Beta to Omega, it’s not necessary at all
Main plothole for me is why did he not know he was half? Like his memories going away wouldn’t change his biology, so why did he never had a heat or transform until now?
Mom was with him till 18 so theres no way shed just… not say anything right???
Also saying the mate mark “came back” but we didnt see it appear before?
And uncle brought up non-blood relation but that seemed irrelevant?
Who is our MCs dad ?!????
Porn’s not bad tho if thats what youre reading for. Some cute soft moments thrown in. Biting, nipple close-ups, etc. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I think this was my 3rd or 4th re-read?
Still super solid.
Good enough, welcome back Loveless