Why was the story was really rushed and made up entirely of miscommunication and lies. It was hard to understand the characters honestly it made them all come off as a little unlikable. Do gyeom is so hot omg I was sad there was only 2 smut scenes between the main couple. Also the author rushed the marriage and pregnancy the best part of an omegaverse anyways story had a lot of potential I think I would have liked it if it had been better paced and longer.
I really loved this one actually if it got finished I’d be so happy.
Everyone so unlikeable the MC hasn’t even rested enough in 15 chapters for me to get to know his character a little really fast paced, it’s too much.
The tags are there stop reading and down voting stories that are clearly not for you. I thought it was really good especially considering it was a short story. I loved it! If you like forbidden love trope give it a chance.
Iall the problems were resolved and then it just ended. Please I need to know how the brother atoned and got better (he had SERIOUS mental issues nothing that could be resolved in a few months.) and ofc I needed more of the main couple! Do they lived together? Do they start a business together idk give us something more please.
He was so evil in their past life like he really did not GAF ido needs to be treated worse. Everything he’s done for redemption so hard. It’s just been protection and using his endless amounts of money. It’s been too easy.
I mean they were…both the problem and found each other ig. The story kinda drags out but I did read til the end (kinda I skipped 4 chapters) somewhat interesting if you like dysfunctional relationships that somehow work.
I couldn’t follow either characters train of thought or guess their next move. They wanted to be together but made it 100x harder for themselves for no reason:
Its funny the ML is wondering who the bad guy is there all the bad guy apparently this plot is a mess.
They went around in cricles for so long and the ML never even got to explain his disorder the MC. Also he said he had a violent streak did he kill animals or beat up other kids? I was so confused with what personality problem he had. The end is very sudden and unsatisfying too bad it had a lot of potential.
Don’t like don’t read? I love it art is beautiful too. Can’t wait for more!