
Bruh Jaekyhung's personality, and Dan's too, is incredibly poorly written. Dan is still the naive 30-year-old crying bunny, and Jaekyhung is an aggressive bastard who has nothing on his mind but fucking and boxing. And the smut is everything besides nice,I skip it bcs it just makes me mad

no literally like instead it feeling like im reading about 2 grown ass men, it feels like I'm reading a story about a angry jock and a naive nerdy kid in a highschool drama. They had such a good basis for character development but they've remained the same for the last 67 chapters and it's lowkey getting hard to read. (sorry for the yap sesh I'm just so done)
Nahh why is the top fucking his step dadthat’s messed up
REAL OH WSIT HE'S THE TOP?? i thought he wld be the bottom
That's the bottom which is lowkey like a step dad. He ain't topping no one
The top is the black hair dude
That’s what I said?
Oh sorry my bad I've dyslexia so I read it wrong
Nah lowky i think they edited their msg cos aint no way i was tripping too (pls don't come after me
So udn to feel bad!! All's good
And sry for the multiple replies (im a huge overthinker)
Nooo all good I wrote it kinda complicated
I DID NOT (︶︿︶)=凸 y’all just have to reread it