I find it somewhat disturbing that every move the MC makes has to be described EVERY SINGLE TIME. Even the most minor details. Let the illustration speak for itself. In this case, I feel like a baby being spoon fed. That's all. Love the illustration tho.
I find it somewhat disturbing that every move the MC makes has to be described EVERY SINGLE TIME. Even the most minor details. Let the illustration speak for itself. In this case, I feel like a baby being spoon fed. That's all. Love the illustration tho.