I’m so glad the emperor asked him if he actually managed to sway her heart. This guy is on a one-man show fantasizing about marrying a girl who hardly remembers his existence. How the hell did he go from being a rational intelligent bodyguard who used to advice the emperor on his feelings to becoming a blushing creep?
I guess at war he's a "genius"... and every where else he's a dunce
I read this masterpiece in one go and something that baffles me is that Shavonne never asked the blond guy why he loved him. I was waiting for him to ask before they started dating but no, not once. I’d think if someone came out of nowhere and started professing their undying love to me out of rhyme or reason, I’d be more curious about that than anything else, certainly more than why they peel onions everyday. Shavonne, why are your priorities so off?
Yo, why is our MC so useless? Does the system not give her any cheats to keep herself safe other than the slave? Is the way to win the game merely by making herself a likable person until she gets the family affection?
for real tho, mc literally be standing there gawking (⊙…⊙ ) at least throw a rock at her or something, anything will do at this point
spoiler
she will actually defeat all those monsters later on! the system will automatically control her movements, and so her reputation and the favorabilty will also increase
To explain why she can't do anything would be giving spoilers but u will say the system does give her opportunities and cheats. For example
This is a minor spoiler so dont read ahead if you dont want it
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the little system pop up to become the queen of the hunting competition is an opportunity to save herself by the system.
woahh what a beast (๑•ㅂ•)و✧ nvm what i said before, you go girl!
Mr Uploader can I please ask why you censor the smut? You do realize for anyone not wanting smut, Mangago would be the last place they’d visit?
True bestie i want to see that dick and pussay
God forbid an author would ever consider making the nice guy get the guy for once instead of the douche
Always find it so absurd when authors make a character trip like toddlers out of nowhere to thicken the plot
SERIOUSLY. it’s so corny lmfao
I get second hand embarrassment just reading those erotic lines
That was it..? There was literally no story there. You really have to admire the author for her talent to draw out 19 whole chapters about literally nothing.
this may just be the season final or something, bc the raws go up to chapter 23?
Anyone else find this story incredibly vanilla? No dislike or anything but I’m just not engaged. Webtoon websites are saturated with these type of stories lately so to stand out you really need more than the typical tragic backstory. The best way to separate a good from bad story is MC’s path to success and this author took the most straightforward and boring path. Marriage. Really? That was the only way MC could get away from her horrid family and fiancé? By jumping into another marriage and making everyone jealous on the way?
in a rational way : yes mariage with a good partner is the best for her
She has no friend, no support, no money, and her family hate her
Rational and logical thinking, You’re absolutely right. But will that be an exciting journey for the reader? Not really unless you through in more characters to the mix with subplots but there aren’t any and her family are just background
it could be if she is reincarnated or sth like that. She has none, no friend, no family, no money, no background, no knowledge. She is a bird in a cage. Unless she is off the street, or working as commoner, there is no way around it.
So by contrast, how realistic is it that she can stumble on a prince and get a royal wedding like a Cinderella? Too convenient. If she can attain a royal marriage this easily, she can definitely find a way out of this cage.
For example, she could have stolen some valuables secretly from her ex fiancé, cashed them and started a business in secret until she files for divorce. She was unhappy and lonely, not some dirt poor prisoner.
that's also true, but marry off to another dude is still more feasible than get rich by on her own and have enough power to talk back to the people who made her suffer. If she steals his money, she would lose her dignity. I don't want her to commit crime because of trash like him. Tbh, the fact that she left without taking anything from him was the best part.
If it's my choice, I would rather her divorce, get some settlements(money,etc) and marry off to a lower rank noble or a wealthy business man, then live her live quietly. But it won't be satisfy for many readers.
she's only book smart, so she know how lead a household. so she need to marry someone who will accept her, but in her country, it will be impossible.
the prince was the best option ( he has a higher status)
But manage a business without partner will be hard, and she have no support.
she could go to jail if she stole something from her ex-fiancé.
In fact she was treated without respect, because if i remember she has a commoner mom (?)
yes, her name was a maid, I think
This is true, ofc marriage is more feasible but again that’s what I meant by boring and convenient. Divorce and settlement money won’t necessarily leave the readers dissatisfied if the author knows how to pull good twists but we obviously know the answer to that.
Her not taking anything from his was not the best part. I completely disagree. She should’ve taken everything and left him homeless for all that depression he caused her but no, we just need to get a yet another Mary Sue who leaves the ex in tears and regret and call that revenge.
She would go to jail only if the ex fiancé reports her and it’s clear now that he had feelings her for so there’s no need to worry about jail time. And even if he didn’t like her, it would be pretty embarrassing to have the world know that your own wife needed to steal in her own house to survive so I’m sure he’d keep quite.
I guess we have to agree to disagree. I don't like taking things the doesn't belong to me, if I was in her case, I would also do the same, I would take nothing from him. Unless they shared money and she made money him, then she should take it. But they are just engaged, not married, so I doubt that it's her money. They didn't go in depth if she managed the dukedom finance, if she didn't, then she really lived off their money.
My only complain so far is that the uke appearance... looks too much like a girl and the the seme is built like a hulk. Literally unrealistic with that face.
Exactly my thoughts... It's just stereotyping gay man in Bl...a bottom is feminine while the top is Overly built and masculine
I thought they made him feminine because he's an omega...
Yeah usually omegas are drawn more feminine and that’s okay. But the author went too far with this one. It felt like reading a shoujo with a penis attached
An omega doesn't have to look girly I mean a bit of feminine isn't bad I love Femboys but this one looks like a GIrl I mean why go extra
I'm sorry. I just had to laugh at that penis part hahahaha i can't
Yeah, I agree. It's better if the omega's body doesn't have much difference from the alpha's body (・_・; just my preference haha
Yeah, I agree. It's better if the omega's body doesn't have much difference from the alpha's body (・_・; just my preference haha