Oh wow, a story where all mothers are alive. Woow.
Except Luciel’s tho. But still. Wooow
Sometimes, I envy the audacity of some buffoons.
But then again, I’m glad I don’t. I might become like them– buffoons.
This is good.
But where on earth did “original novel” came from????
That was such a fantasy shattering… idek if it was a translation mistake cuz the context of how it was told make sense. But the context of the whole premise??? Out of no where.
Ruined my experience as a reader.
As far as the readers know, she just time traveled and was not transmigrated.
I love the consistency of this story.
Also, this is how you write/show if a character is super adorable/lovable/cute.
Instead of saying and saying and saying, you show and show and show.
This has to be some sort of dream or an illusion.
Cuz ain’t no way…
This HAS to be some sort of magical trick
Bruh Bluepool and AnAn ain’t it. Why is the route going there.
I know it’s a world where social norm is very different from ours… so in a way it make sense.
But man… it’s eugh.
I don’t know about yall, but I LOVE the romance. Slow burn or not, they’re all genuine.
Excluding the subhuman ofc.
This one is goooood.
The pacing??? 10/10
Plot??? …. Objectively speaking, 8.3/10; me personally with biased? 10/10
MC personality?? 10/10
My shaylas?? A lot.
I haaaaaaate this story’s cliffhanger.
No story made me annoyed at a cliffhanger than this one does.
I hate that it’s working
The hate against Gemma doesn’t make any sense. Are they just being a hater for the sake of the story?? The story’s good, but like the villains aren’t that much.
Like sure jealousy, but other than Ariya or wtv who was explained poorly, she’s the only one who got an explanation of why Gemma get so much hate.
The doubt about her perfect score make sense. That actually make sense why people are targeting her cuz she track record sucked.
But from the mom, Elodie and arayana does not make any sense.
The mom pissed me off too.
Like you found out Elodie schemed against Gemma, and still won’t apologize. And maybe, I don’t know, look at Gemma in a motherly way?
And man, why was it Gemma who “stole” the pink diamond is her first go to?????
Elodie is weird, what happened for an 8 year old to be able to scheme like that???? Who even believed an 8 year old to kidnap a baby or sum???
Like bro.. the story is good but there isn’t a good villain.
A new arc..
Time to marinate this for a few months ლ(´ڡ`ლ)