
This...I dont even know wear to begin...... holy fuck trying to get through this dumb fuck reading was like walking through thorn bushes in the middle of the night. I can understand some misshaps here and there, but my fucken god! I got a migraine just trying to figure out just what the fuck anyone was saying at any given time! The plots didn't help either. What a fucken nightmare! the second story was the ONLY FUKEN PEACE that had anything interesting about it with a healthy heaping of fluffy love to it! If only it weren't a one shot. I would love to dig into that plot with his past, and then flush it all out with a clearer understanding of just how our good and honest man saved him from himself. I'm mean there was so much potential in it! Fuck this shit, I'm done.....good bye...I'm going to find something to cleanse both my mind and eyes with now.
The end of this last chap got me smiling like a idiot