I waited five chapters to read this and I'm wondering why. Don't get me wrong, I'm not offended by rape or dog's blood in yaoi. I'm offended by poor writing and bad storytelling, something this manhwa has in spades.
What even is this story? Who are these characters? What is this world? I don't know because the author has spent no time on the story, the characters, or the world. The author has only spent time on the MC's hole.
Boy, you have no right to be getting upset about what the hair stylist does in his free time because of what you do in yours! You literally jerked another man off in a public bathroom.
He's so stupid it's actually toxic, lol. I don't mind a toxic uke though, it's a nice change of pace.
Y'all are crazy and have terrible taste in men. Obviously the second guy is better because he's not a slave trader, lol.
Everyone on this website just desperately wants the most toxic ML possible.
Guideverse with pretty art is literally my favorite. I hope this is sweet with good drama!
The artist Re-Twinkified the MC, gave him back his boyish features and removed his extra height and shoulder width, because he was going to be in the same panel as the ML, lol.
This is such a trash. It's like the Jack in the box tacos of yaoi manhwa. We all know it's trash, we all know it's bad, but we're going to eat it anyways, lol
Lol this translation is so bad it's hilarious! They're having a flirty phone conversation and the translator has them ask "did you poop?" Lol
Omg I can't stop laughing.
There's no disease in real life that's as debilitating as a manhwa uke with a cold.
Nah, everyone's saying the art isn't good is correct. Clearly the artist knows how to draw but they have no idea how to draw movement. Everyone is stiff. It's like they are taking a PNG and wobbling it across a background.
It makes it harder to believe the stakes in the story. It makes it harder to be immersed in the story. It's really a shame because this would be one of the most popular and well regarded yaoi out there but they clearly hired someone who had never drawn any movement.
It's like the artist had only ever drawn doodles before, you know character portraits on random paper and never actual scenes.
I do not understand why this trope is so popular.
You cannot raise a child and then fuck them. This is grooming nonsense. You cannot raise a child, change their gender into the perfect gender for you to fuck, and then fuck them.
If you live next door to a 12-year-old you cannot interact with them daily, ingratiate yourself into their lives, give them presents, make them like you as an authority figure, and then fuck them! That's grooming. It's grooming even if you wait until they're 18.
Using your developed adult brain and position of authority as an older person to raise a child and your perfect little fucktoy is grooming.
The main character of this manhwa is a disgusting degenerate groomer. The point of this manhwa is to show you how positive and great grooming is, it's to make you see the world from the point of view of a groomer, it's too normalize grooming.
Did the art change? It looks... Less pretty? More like every other manhwa? I don't know. It just looks a little different, a little lower quality.
So this Paradise scam is the new cocomics which was the new Zin Chan manga, lol
Using his sick mom to get in the room with him was diabolical, lol
It's funny how the manager is the perfect warning against fucking your coworkers. His motivation isn't what's best for Daniel or their business but rather his own feelings for Daniel.
It's so hard to break out of grooming. I completely understand why the guide is like this.
I'm usually one of those people yelling about how dumb the MC is because normally authors make the MC fully grown and also incredibly stupid for no reason, not this time. The guide may not be fully free of his grooming until he's into his thirties or forties and then he has to deal with the fact that he was groomed and he'll see how wrong that is...
That nasty pedophile should have his dick cut off and then be strung up until he dies of exposure. All pedophiles should be treated the same way.
I'm really disappointed the artist made this villain psudo-2nd ML so ugly. We know he's not real competition but he should at least be attractive. He's balding and alien looking.
Is his family's curse being ugly?
There's been a lot of setup and it's been both fun and rewarding, but I'm ready for the second act. We need some conflict.
Look, I know that I'm petty... There is no such thing as a red sapphire. Red sapphires are rubies. The ring that blonde man called a sapphire is red.
Sapphires are gemstones made of the mineral corundum that occur in many colors, such as blue, yellow, green, and pink. The only color that is not called sapphire is red. When corundum is red, it is classified as a ruby.
This means that rubies and sapphires are essentially the same mineral, just distinguished by color. A “red sapphire” is not a recognized gem type. If the stone is truly red corundum, it is always considered a ruby.
Oh no. We all know the second that woman dies that scumbag is going to rape the MC.
Why can't he just run away with his man?! (He can't because that would be a boring story lol)