
wtf is with the plot. Its basic but still... reading it is weird. and wtf is wrong with the characters, they seem all so natural unenvolved in any business.
Oh is that blood, well nevermind that. Oh I am pregnant, oh I gor raped. mhmmm.
Oh my girlfriend is pregnant, lets ask her about that and keep our cool.
Oh wtf that bitch isnt dead, how dare her, oh she is pregnat, wuhu, smelling another good idea to break her up with her boyfriend by acting totally out of line.
Wow, I wish for her that she will never return. Otherwise RIP. Girl, you are so lucky!!!
I can’t believe she actually left that house alive!!! Damn she brave!!!!
Yeah, when I read "come in" I was like NOOOOOOO, RUUUUN!!! (⌒▽⌒) Never expected that she got away. nice suprise, author-san. *-*