
Bro, for the longest time, they forgot about the brother. There's no sense of urgency from Yohan even though his bro is supposedly going to die. He's important because he's the reason Yohan is doing all this. Also feels like they forgot that Yohan is supposed to be a spy.
Love this story, but those two points always feel like the elephant in the room. There's some dishonesty in Yohan & Victor's relationship I how the story addresses soon.
Beautiful so far..