
Bro what's actually happening in chap 4? Is it supposed to be supernatural? Why does it all only feel like a dream?
And I don't really think the brother slept with his half sister he may have said that to spite his in-law my assumption is he got kicked out of his house because he's gay since at one point his sister ask the husband whether her brother did anything disrespectful to him. Then again, I don't really know ( ̄へ ̄)
He practically stood there watching him shot to death doing nothing and then suddenly like, NIGEL! IMMA BRING THIS WHOLE DAMN ORGANISATION DOWN! I can understand he is helpless at the moment but well(⊙…⊙ )?? Maybe it gotta do with the pacing of the story it's like reading a synopsis things happening too fast
Because he would literally die if he tried to stop them?? He would literally expose the fact he’s also undercover and would literally also lose his life
LMAO yup you are right. I just felt the whole things unnecessarily dramatic that's all
Yes but it's so rushed you really don't feel anything for it. We're only 8 chapters in and we've got an entire backstory scene. Everything's so rushed it hard to read