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These two are sure made for each other lol

The story somehow has potential but the writing is really bad like it is illogical or doesnt make sense

Chapter1 - So his only means to get intel from one night stands then distances from them? It's just logical that if you been trying to get intel from a hard to infiltrate city which seems allergic to giving info to detectives or cops is try to be of the person in that city, to build connections and relationships to eventually get intel. That's what most undercover people do. He also said he doesnt give his number duh it's common sense for undercover people who to have a secondary phone or fake phone and would never refuse getting connections coz they may need it in the future. lmao. He also met Eliseo in a sus situation yet he doesnt ask questions or investigate him? What's he doing there? Just sleeping around? lol
Im about to write my other inputs for chapters 2,3 and 4 but tf it is so obvious already. Good read but written badly. Maybe that's the reason why it was dropped

When authors try hard to put a conflict that dont make sense just to force drama. Why go all lengths with baby trapping? It's easier if Yuuma just exposed Yuuya that he knows his feelings with Ren and vice versa and he knew that he is setting up with him and he doesnt want it. They helped him and Ren get together and talked about them having artificial insemination through him they agreed. Then theyre know a family like how the story started and Yuuma went on his way on by himself. For conflict Yuuma suddenly goes back, said he's being relocated for work for a few days and will live them temporarily everything's good but then Yuuya's old jealousy and insecurity cones back seeing Yuuma interacting with Ren and Sana.

I mean that's a better drama plot right? makes more sense, no baby trapping

This kind of story may be boring to some but it's actually refreshing to read this coz it's relatable. it kinda gives like a realistic approach on why most relationships dont work when youre too different from each other. No heavy plot, no traumatic childhood and I know each one of us probably know/met someone like the ML who just breezes through life, good looking, indulged by parents, always partying, had on and off steady and flings then all of a sudden they will drop everything and change because of someone.

I have been wondering why I dont see Urara in Babylis considering it seems he wasnt far younger/older than Clara during first appearance. He's been in that school all along. Maybe he has scholarship there or maybe he's an Eiji fanatic and chose to enrol in that school

That girl Mariabel will be Yuuki's manas And now she taunts Yuuki with all chance she got

them peaches

Sorry Hayato, but I want you to have a boyfriend. Uta and Minato will get married in the future anyways

ML's memories will be back. Then short drama. They will hold a "funeral" for the 18y/o Vasili. Yoon's parents will arrive, they will talk, ML will say they are dating and engaged. They will go to Russia, visit ML's bro, the end

SW was just angry bec when Gran will go to the nursing home he will have no reason to be useful to YW. Also, he goes home in an empty house where he has ofc sad memories in it so looking over Gran is like a therapy for him too.