I wanted to like this but I couldn’t. I mean the plot and story was good and interesting but the age gap and power dynamic made me drop it.i tried to ignore it but couldn’t I mean the mc was FRESHLY 18, even worse they fucked on the same night he turned 18. It was just too weird it’s quite literally barely legal
I saw comments talking about the Vince wasn’t over yoen and about how his soul is now intertwined with arrie i had doubts about liking this story but i completely disagreed
It looked like Vince liked Arrie before he had any idea of the situation, and I don’t think he ever actually knew that their souls were intertwined. I actually found it really sweet and sad knowing a part of yoens soul went in arries because it felt like he was putting arrie first just like he did when he was alive (being in denial about his love for Vance) Yoen obviously cared and loved arrie even with how his parents treated him and I feel heartbroken that he never got a happy ending or closure and instead just died thinking Vance didn’t care if he lived or died and feeling guilty for liking him while knowing arrie liked him.
Wasn’t the worst thing I’ve read but definitely wasn’t good or the best, it was just really fucking weird, especially at the end when the dads also got pregnant like bro please your over retirement age and kind of just messed up your kids relationship(obviously not on purpose but still) a bit why did you have to make it worse
And when the son got turned on watching his dad having sex I was so weirded out, I thought it was super unnecessary but idk
I never really liked the step-sibling/adopted trope so I can’t really complain since it wasn’t out of character and they made it clear since the beginning it was going to be a weird step sibling family situation and it’s lowkey on me for continuing reading it but idk i feel like they should have let the dad couple without a kid together
Wasn’t the worst thing I’ve read but definitely wasn’t the best, it was just really fucking weird, especially at the end when the dads also got pregnant like bro please your over retirement age and kind of just messed up your kids relationship(obviously not on purpose but still) a bit why did you have to make it worse
And when the son got turned on watching his dad having sex I was so weirded out, I thought it was super unnecessary but idk
I never really liked the step-sibling/adopted trope so I can’t really complain since it wasn’t out of character and they made it clear since the beginning it was going to be a weird step sibling family situation and it’s lowkey on me for continuing reading it but idk i feel like they should have let the dad couple without a kid together
Dropped it halfway, things were advancing too fast. It felt like the MC felt harassed and uncomfortable by the ML (you could tell by how relieved and relaxed he was when ml wouldn’t stop by)and then just randomly started liking him which felt weird. The ML also coerced the MC to do sexual stuff for his reviews which felt so weird??
Tbh the mc has more chemistry with his friend than the ml










His first crush’s ego is way too fucking high. He’s so cocky for no reason, I mean MC is famous and rich while he’s spending his parents money and being a fucking asshole. Mc was a huge pushover but it’s his first love and friend since childhood..I was praying for him to beat his ass but stories with this plot never do that so I didn’t expect it. I was cheering when he actually hit his shit rocked by MC at the end.
I loved the ML and how he comforted and always made MC feel valid, loved MC for always being honest with him too. Felt refreshing because there wasn’t a chance for miscommunication