It's not bad but the dialogue reminded me of how ppl write the mc's main thoughts and internal reactions in fanfiction. Usually mangaka they keep inner dialogue short, and either vague or to the point, and use the manga to say everything its not explicitly saying out right. Probably why some may be put off, since its different from the usual manga format and written in a way to explain everything going on. Again not bad, personally I got used to it quick.
This should be a how to get the audience to hate the main female character of a Manga.
Step 1: Be this manga.
Step 2: Give her no redeeming qualities.
Step 3: Make chap 8 and expect the audience to hate her even more.
Step 4: souichiro is best Boi.
He knows, he's gotta know whats going on, and yet he still pretends it's not happening and is with her after he "caught them" I feel bad man.
It was going good almost like walking down a lovely art exhibit and then we got towards the end of the exhibit but instead of an exit we smacked hard into a brick wall did a loop and found the exit behind curtain number 1. It was alright. The art was pretty, the story was fine but the ending was like, let's insert some drama we can resolve in 2s so it doesn't extend to a second chapter even if it makes it seem rushed. Kai was cute tho
How is 'mr. steal your omega' still so young looking? Time has passed and he still looks like the day we saw him in the flashback :/ same suit, hair everything. Did time stay still for him? Wtf. How is hiroto just gonna stand by and let him take his omega from him? He doesnt have to screw him but go punch that guy and tell him to get lost chikage is yours like why you just standin there? Poor chikage.











Memes, top tier