The art is great the story is kinda refreshing tbh but like this story could've ended with 12 chapter and it'll be the goat cause like, they extended it to 69 chapter (which 80% of it being them eating eachother out) and it made you feel invested but suddenly it's a memory loss story and as if everything hasn't happened and won't happen, but it did, it progressed, but regressed, dunno it feels like when you were sleeping and dreaming about eating some good food but by the time you bite it, your alarm woke you up and you just left with empty feelings inside
I pray n I pray for her to not forgive her brother and actually stay with her family rn, cause like okay you tried so hard to make her "place" but like is that any way to abandon her on a snowy day alone n just lash out at her, for anyone who's gonna say 1 bad thing that he did doesn't equal everything, fuck off ( ̄へ ̄), but her fiance is actually decent tho, just that PLEASE just say "I'm thankful for the 13 years (his name + title) that you acted as my brother, now I have my own family that actually like me, so go on to our own journey and fuck off"











This one is good plot bad execute kinda thing, I don't mind if FL being helpless but like she was a grown woman that reincarnated into a novel and didn't suspect anything at all (idc about the powerful guy ATP, more to like noble talk kinda thing) she cannot choose for the sake of her, like why make a story that treated the ml as if an accessories, atleast be grateful to the ml (I'm guessing that the black hair is the ml but I think this one will be a four way harem) (and that ghost duke is probably her father) I'm not even talking at how dumb she is, baka rina is smarter than her?? Okay the author is probably going to the she's so kind route so she would never be a calamity and boom she is and everyone tryna save her kinda stuff but like, girlie has no respect for others. This is sad, I kinda liked it at first ╥﹏╥