smileyanon April 17, 2025 7:58 pm

This is what happen when you make story at 15yo and got an okay to publish when you are 20ish yo.

Ngl, the premise is good. Die, wanna know why you die, and want revenge BUT GOD HELP ME WITH HER USELESS STUPID DECISION IN EVERY MOVE.

You almost die (again) because of horse and a man save your ass and called out your FULL NAME but plot twist you already died 6 month ago. HUH, so how does this man so sure its you? Aint no way he from the future too riiiiiighht (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

You tell a maid to deliver a letter so daddy can pick you up after long sleep-over, well you know damn well the letter would be read by those brothers and high risk for being stolen but the next night, you went to hire an informant for the bitch that your ex husband fucking on the side? WHY NOT HIRE SOMEONE TO DELIVER THE FUCKING LETTER FROM THE START?! The bitch can wait. She not going anywhere and you cant do shit to her too since the bitch isnt yours at all.

The ML is someone from royal family and a soldier of shadow...? Why not captain? He got money to have one guild.
And what part gave a long ass sword to a fucking twink of a lady a good idea? She stabbed a guard that trained and DIE..? I know the guard isnt dead but 2 of ML followers did said he would die if they let him which means that twink of a lady take long ass sword and stab him hard enough for him to bleed and die. FUCK THAT.
And for her to ended up IN THE DUNGEON ITSELF like..?? WHY THE FUCK YOU STAB THAT GUARD THEN?! Just let them take you.

Oh look a NEW GUARD as USELESS AS HIS LADY. Fucking let his lady in coridor to fecth a water, bro put her in her room first! Mf your lady aint a special guest in that fucking household. Let his lady gone and LET HER BE IN A MAN ROOM?! MF YOU ARE HER GUARD! SHE A WOMAN, UNMARRIED, SLEEP IN A MAN ROOM AND THAT MAN IS IN THE SAME ROOM TOO!! If I'm your lady, mf I'm gonna executed you for being DUMBASS and tarnish my purity, you fucking bitch.
The horse ride scene? FUCK YOU.

I know all of this for plot device but Jesus take the wheel for every unreasonable shit she did. Moreover these chara is the one that we supposed to like. The one that we are not supposed to like is more shithead with teenager tantrum and idiotic-stank ass brain.

smileyanon April 17, 2025 5:44 pm

The boygroup look like they are over 35 ╥﹏╥

The fuck with the girl group's center? She be touching man while she just DEBUTED and in a plain sight daylight too ( ̄∇ ̄")

I get that we still dk what his grand revenge plan for the nepobaby BUT BROOO WHY TF YOU MAKE THE SAME COMPANY THAT DRAINE YOU TO DEATH A FUCKING FAT CHECK? Which part that is a revenge?! They even sit next to each other during award (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ Thats means nepobaby still not discover as a plagiarist.

YOU ALREADY PLAGIARIZED SOMEONE, JUST GO WITH RIVAL COMPANY AND TOOK CREDIT FOR THEIR DEBUT CONCEPT (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ At least not that company got fat check

smileyanon April 16, 2025 11:57 pm

I like how author gave me wake up call through Malcom to reliaze something is off with Andrew. If its not because of Malcom, I probably gonna hype him up for being SO OBSESSED with his man

smileyanon April 16, 2025 5:20 pm

This is what sibling should look like not marrying each other after grew up together ( ̄へ ̄)

    ༺Mavis Lahar༻ May 8, 2025 3:26 pm

    why do you sound so specific lol XD....the only one close to what you're talking about that I read is "A Stepmother's Marchen"
    oh wait now that I think about it, there was one... "The Viridiscent Crown"...I think it's similar since they are not related by blood but still legally siblings....I never finished reading them. I don't know if they marry or not. I got bored lol.
    I know damn well if you search enough, you will find ACTUAL incest cause Authors nowadays are WILD AF!

    Chryselephantine May 14, 2025 5:14 am
    why do you sound so specific lol XD....the only one close to what you're talking about that I read is "A Stepmother's Marchen"oh wait now that I think about it, there was one... "The Viridiscent Crown"...I thin... ༺Mavis Lahar༻

    when does this happen in Stepmother's Marchen? I'm not done reading it but pre sure Nora is the ML. Also adopted sibling being the ML is pretty common, especially in Japanese manga. I know bc I drop them everytime it happens. Off the top of my head, "Beware of the Brothers" lol

    helvetica May 31, 2025 6:49 am
    why do you sound so specific lol XD....the only one close to what you're talking about that I read is "A Stepmother's Marchen"oh wait now that I think about it, there was one... "The Viridiscent Crown"...I thin... ༺Mavis Lahar༻

    A lot of stories that have “brother” in the title… yeah usually it’s the keep it in the family ending. You know you gotta start worrying when they reveal “oh! We’re not technically blood related!” There’s surprisingly a lot.

smileyanon April 16, 2025 7:43 am

The background flowers for 2nd ML is really irritated me. Let him be handsome by his face alone (╯°Д °)╯╧╧

smileyanon April 12, 2025 9:47 am

THE TIDDIES!!! I WANT TO GROPE THAT TIDDY TOO!! ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ

smileyanon April 7, 2025 11:47 pm

She... a bit dumb.
I mean why would she let loose a bitch that she KNEW would whore herself out without a guard or someone spying?
I also still not understand why keep her? Like you could just killed her with a reason of murder. What stopped her?

smileyanon March 21, 2025 10:05 pm

What kind a fucking nugu grup got a proper van car and a good building as their dorm?! ( ̄へ ̄ )
And have money to eat bbq as dinner?! ( ̄∇ ̄")

smileyanon March 14, 2025 6:48 pm

Wait? Does that mean Genas kill the last princess? Forgot her name Ver something.
Isnt she kind princess? Whyyyy

smileyanon March 12, 2025 10:22 pm

"Sir you are pregnant"

"Really?"

"Haha joking. You just got depression"

ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

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