what do yall think is the reason ppl write stuff like this? Like the author fr said "andtheyalllivehappilyeveraftertheend" like HUH??!?!?!
Wait, but like was it ever explained why the guy liked her?
which one? the lead? or the guy they murdered?
The lead
They are explaining it the side stories. But whatever they are just some people who need therapy. Like they aren't normal.
do bl authors understand that not everything has to be about sex? like sometimes possession or (in this story) eating is okay. wouldnt that be more relevant to the plot??? ig at least the plot moved forward in this chapter.
It's her story she can plot her how she please, you can write your own, I will be happy to read. But let's just read enjoy story and let be author be, cause she becomes author to make stories how she like them to be
Literally but none of them got the juice
Do you understand that this particular BL is in the explicit category?
Do you understand that there's a bunch of BL that's not explicit?
Do you understand that you dont have to read the explicit stuff?
i cant be critical of a lazy choice in the writing? This story is going no where and now the MC is being raped bc ig the author needs more time to plot this story? its just lazy imo.
do u understand criticism?
do you understand thats not the topic at hand rn?
do you understand people have their own likes and dislikes? one of mine happens to be lazy writing. If i minded smut i wouldnt be reading this. i MIND "oh idk how this plot should go, lets just do a sex scene for now".
Wooow you are just soooo boring person.... Rewrite same comment ╮(￣▽￣)╭
You don't get the concept of criticism you were just complain
cant respond to the comment meant for you? realized all my points we're correct and now u cant come up with anything to say? if ur mad about my opinion, too bad. build a bridge babe.
nasty asf. i hate old bandaids to start with but one soaked in cum AND bro hasnt shit? nahhhhh
story sucks im ngl...maybe its just not written well, but its just kinda boring? cant explain why i dont like it.
It’s not really going anywhere, they just keep dropping more lore without progressing the story
and no time to get attached to the characters in the lore either. Im like im not even sure i should care about this
That’s what I’m saying
okay but with the spoiler its kind of obvious he would go back to him bc you can swallow the fluids of someone u dont like fr
CANT*
dellas getting larger and Keith is getting smaller is2g
I'm so glad somone else noticed, I feel like it was super apparent whenever Della put his hand on Keith's stomach and legit covered the whole thing, that was the point when the anatomy was really not anatomying... ┗( T﹏T )┛
is so unserious i love it. theyre just standing there with their (GIANT mind u) dicks l. standing STRAIGHT UP thats not how they work esp that big. anyways w threesome