this is such an odd jump in genre for this author. this story looks like its gunna be even crazier next season.
EIGHT FIVE CHAPTERS BEFORE SOME smut. i thought this story was PG with way it was going but OKAY
is....not great. i had this issue with full volume too. things r just happening for no reason, but at least in full volume the world is well built and the story made sense. rn all we have is hes a sacrifice, he met mugo when he was young, mugo was like "oh i like him i wont eat him", omegaverse shit????, a rape scene, and HINTS of something else is happening but i dont think the author even knows what it is. Someone gotta reign this story in!! （￣へ￣）
is so unserious i love it. theyre just standing there with their (GIANT mind u) dicks l. standing STRAIGHT UP thats not how they work esp that big. anyways w threesome
what do yall think is the reason ppl write stuff like this? Like the author fr said "andtheyalllivehappilyeveraftertheend" like HUH??!?!?!
do bl authors understand that not everything has to be about sex? like sometimes possession or (in this story) eating is okay. wouldnt that be more relevant to the plot??? ig at least the plot moved forward in this chapter.
nasty asf. i hate old bandaids to start with but one soaked in cum AND bro hasnt shit? nahhhhh
story sucks im ngl...maybe its just not written well, but its just kinda boring? cant explain why i dont like it.
okay but with the spoiler its kind of obvious he would go back to him bc you can swallow the fluids of someone u dont like fr