
okay as a writer i feel sure that they are not gonna let her kill steal a so plot relevant and story important kill as this demon (if they kill it) but dang it does not stop my blood from boiling when it looked like she had stolen his kill. I like her a lot, but girly, she need to step back and let our boy murder that fucker

as it used to be said. if you don't like it, don't read it.
No one is forcing you to read this story, so if you have nothing nice to say or if you really need it give advice to ho the story or art could get better, maybe stop being rude and remember this is made by a person? think abut how you would feel reading random strangers shitting on your work that you dared to put out there.
Not to mention, girlies, we are all reading this illegal, if you want the rights to complain then go pay the artist. Don't sit here reading this illegally and shit on art that you could not even do. Do you all have no idea how hard it is to make a story when you are not just copying what everyone else is doing? yes this is not super original, but it sure as fuck has a plot and characters that feels less flat then what BL characters use to.
Now lets all act our age, not be rude, and remember not to be like our parents who put down anything we like just because it is not their taste or up to their standers.
bitches really be out there thinking they can stop our boi from getting 100 point. have they not learned that if it is hard enough for him not to ace then everyone else will straight up die.