story was good, but the late chapters have been dragging on for too long. She has lived for so long and sure i get her not trying to be greedy or whatever but there is a difference between that nad her active shutting everything anyone offers her down. Trauma is of course very long lasting, ut if i wanted that then I would just look at my own life, I don't need that in my romance fantasy.
okay as a writer i feel sure that they are not gonna let her kill steal a so plot relevant and story important kill as this demon (if they kill it) but dang it does not stop my blood from boiling when it looked like she had stolen his kill. I like her a lot, but girly, she need to step back and let our boy murder that fucker











I can't wait to see how they are gonna make this into a romance after this. not sure how you get back from doing that o your partner