I’m just so over having the FL do all of the emotional processing for every single significant male character in the series. I have read so many stories where the FL literally has to teach the ML, her brothers, father, and any other relevant male the concepts of emotional awareness, thinking about other people’s feelings, being considerate, not being selfish, communicating the most basic things, and regulating emotions.
It’s such a common, tired trope. I’m sick of authors treating FLs like therapists. There’s a difference between making the FL carry the entire emotional burden of leading someone else through their entire cycle of self awareness/growth/healing, and making her a supportive friend/partner/family member.
I like the story, but I find developments like this really frustrating.
NGL, Sunwoos brother and lawyer friend are not sitting right with me. It’s true that Sunwoo is a frustrating and annoying person to deal with, but they gave him horrible advice both legally and socially.
1. A lot of what they told him essentially boils down to “nobody would ever want to tolerate/date/live with/marry/raise a kid with someone like you”. That assumption also informs their advice about custody. A lot of their criticisms of his behavior are valid, but some of what they said is just objectively cruel. It’s just not something you say, even if you do believe it.
2. They should know full well by now that Sunwoo is not slick, quick thinking, or even an average liar. It’s ridiculous of them to expect him to be able to pull a fast one on someone as cautious, savvy, and observant as Eungyo, no matter how well it may be planned by others. Even if he was a good liar, there’s no way Eungyo would have read/signed those papers without noticing something was off.
3. Counseling him to lie, backtrack experimental permissions, and hide the child from Eungyo only would have made everything worse when Sunwoo got caught. Once that deception came out, Eungyo would have tons of ammunition to go after him in court for custody, fraud, illegal experimentation, and probably other stuff as well.
This is bullshit. So ML basically got away with saying racist, hurtful things to Flynn with zero emotional, relationship, or other consequences. Not even a spat or cooling off period. Stories like this will usually bend over backwards to make sure the ML or top get everything they want with minimal consequences, but this is the most ridiculously extreme case of the MC just glossing over such blatant harm without even registering it psychologically, even if they don’t react outwardly.
I don’t know if this is just me, but I find the revelation of how the apocalypse happened to be kind of… lame? I’m not a big fan of the “power of feelings” trope when it’s used in a clumsy and nonsensical way. Atel was captured, held prisoner, and completely trapped for years, completely helpless from the sealing chains, but the second he finds out MC is dead, he magically breaks out like nothing, only to lose control and destroy the continent.
His character just doesn’t match. He’s gone through rejection trauma, forced to go to war, assassination attempts, etc… since he was young and shrugged it off with no ill effects or outbursts other than being mildly sad about it sometimes.
Idk, there was like zero setup to show that 1. He would even have intense emotional outbursts, or 2. lose control from those intense emotions, in the spectacular manner he did. I get that the death of a loved one is different, but it just felt random since the setup wasn’t there.
And the rampage isn’t even explained well. So he has shallow thoughts about destroying the world that “failed Beaty”, but that reaction makes no sense with the rest of his character because he’s destroying villages, killing civilians, etc. Is he possessed by his power, reverting to an animalistic state? Atel is shown consistently to be a just leader who cares about the country and people, so if the descent into complete abandonment of his previous character/morals doesn’t make sense in terms of his thought process, there needs to be another explanation offered.
Just feels like a shallow way to demonstrate an excessive dedication to MC to later push a romance that really doesn’t have much psychological buildup. Other than being friendly to each other and “feelings go thump” there really isn’t any romantic buildup between them, so this feels like a shallow plot forcer trying to cram the relationship down the readers’ throats without actually writing a believable/fleshed out romance, which is actually extremely common in these stories.
The entire sequence of events and character shifts is completely incoherent.
The way I understood it is that Atel didn't try to escape earlier because he felt that doing so would put Byul in harms way. He stayed a prisoner so Byul could live but once he got proof of her death he broke down and destroyed everyrhing.
Well that would be one thing, but he went through the same sequence in the second life, so I feel like my points still stand
Bro ╥﹏╥ （/TДT)/ this should be tagged as a horror. ML is scary as hell
Not the seme acting butthurt like he isn’t using Flynn as well. He’s using Flynn and his body as medical treatment knowing full well he doesn’t have other options. Flynn only “betrayed” him to be reunited with his long lost brother, oh yeah and also PREVENT HIM FROM BEING MURDERED. Then he pulled a double hitter by attacking Flynn’s sensitive points that have a lot of trauma while saying hurtful racist stuff at the same time. Flynn risked it all to come clean and got degraded for it. When the hell is “the right timing” to tell your exploitative contract lover that you’re being blackmailed into corporate espionage against him? Seme already knew about it, but even if Flynn hadn’t admitted it, he wouldn’t gotten ripped a new one for being deceitful and in league with his brother, “why didn’t you tell me so we could handle it together” bs. Seme is a narcissist point blank. Nothing will ever be his fault and anything that ever doesn’t go to his liking will be projected onto the most convenient punching bag
amen to that
Wow the Center tried to leave him high and dry so he would have to allow them to exploit him to the max only to have it explode in their faces. They could have given him a special position with better pay and benefits so they could move him around to desperate cases, but they were happier to have him scrambling to make ends meet and in physical shambles.
The way the Center commander was so fixated on making sure Hojin felt like he had no choice but to stay and put up with the mistreatment that he used a spontaneous terrorist attack as another excuse. Joke’s on them because now he’s desperate enough to take an exclusive contract with the most dangerous/hated esper in the country to escape their abuse of power.
Wow, so Sangjin didn’t even start drugs of his own free will. He was drugged unknowingly until he developed enough of a physical dependency that he would “choose” to take them on his own. He really never had a chance…
While Hamir seems to have developed some feelings for her, they’re rooted in novel curiosity and desire to possess her. She was the first to befriend him in such an open and uncalculating way. Her behavior and actions are uniquely intelligent and resilient, attractive qualities. He’s only focused on his own benefit though. He let her build a friendship knowing full well she would be in an awkward position if anyone found out, and humiliated/betrayed once she found out. And once that scenario played out, his regret was not using the crisis to his benefit, not preventing the crisis in the first place.