I for once don’t want the person that raise him somehow now developed feelings. This story is going to be complex and I hope authors doesn’t add unnecessary drama because it already has the pot full.
Our seme was psychologically abused by the dead brother till the day he died. He literally played him to the point the only person he trusted and love left him because he wanted that. He wanted for our ML to know he was “alone”. Then on top of that he was adopted to be somewhat a “replacement”.
In so it’s a very sad story itself that doesn’t need our MC to be now on this confuse conflict.
And pls take this lightly because I’m sleep deprived and idk if I’m explaining myself right lol
I have so much to say. (may be because I got influenced by my stressful day)
I’m okay when a ML is naive and dumb if the story ain’t that serious and I’m also okay with dark psychological stories. However as much as I like our ML, he is so f*cking dumb.
I would expect from being kidnapped before he would be more aware and un trustful of new
people. I mean I get it he admire his boss but his admiration doesn’t me he should go head first into trusting him.
For god sake! You could have gone to your friends house (the ones who ACTUALLY BROUGHT UP him acting strange) or idk go home to his parents! This story makes it seem his alone but then we get this side characters giving us that he isn’t.
THEN YOU INSTEAD OF GOING HOME YOU GO TO AN ALPHA HOUSE THAT YOU DONT KNOW.IN REALITY! HE IS FUCKING NAKED! ROCK HARD! OBVIOUSLY KICKED OUT A FUCK BUDDY AND YOU ARE LIKE:
oh this are the same pills that my friend who is acting weird gave me and now have me acting strange but i guess since it’s this professor i admired that is giving it to me i should trust it.
LIKE IT MAKES ZERO SENSE!
Also we all know that the person following him it’s the dude that sold the dumbass crazy blonde drugs and works for the professor.
Idk why this story is bothering me as much as the Josei peach something lol









At this point the story is a bit confusing but in a way that seems the author wants us to be.
However I have to say it..idk why but the arts seems to become wonkier and uglier over time. I love the art of the other story so I was so excited for this one. But idk if they are forcing them to be faster or what but I have noticed over the chapters the art has become more “square” idk if that makes sense.