Oh author I love your portrayal of the characters. Not a single chapter goes by where you don't give them more personality than they already seem to have
Hell nah you only hate him because of that!? You trying to be edgy or sm, with this long I thought at least he would've figured out the kind of work alexei does
blondie's kinda dumb ╥﹏╥
Basically pwp cause wtf is with thay atrocious amount of time skips
“hey how do we show that this cop (who btw was being reprimanded for police brutality but that’s chill i guess) infiltrated and reached the highest ranks of the mafia under his actual identity?”
…
FIVE YEARS LATER
“okay but how do we justify the romance when this man only joined the mafia because he swore revenge over the death of his mother and also he had to watch his (plot device of a) cop friend traumatically die in front of him?”
…
DRUNK SEX AND THREE YEARS LATER
I’m still trying to figure out how old they’re supposed to be then. In the beginning they were 23 and 27 if I remember correctly, so does that mean that 9 years later (minor spoiler, theres another time skip in chapter 23) they are in their early to mid thirties? Or those ages shown in the beginning from a flash forward?
Hmm?
of fucking course there’s another time skip lmfao
These three makes quite a peculiar trio
They're so entertaining to watch lmao
Uncle... Say that question out loud once again and ponder whether this is an appropriate question to a 13y old
Nah not his weeny