Story was really cute.
Also, I kind of agree with what the blue haired guy said. The mc was really bad at fighting and how should I put it.. slow at reading the situation? He has a good heart ofc and believes in justice, but since he hopes to become a cop, he should probably be more wary and have some basic fighting knowledge right
This is just some side stuff that I bothered me though. Would recommend this story if you love light-hearted romance. Dont expect anything intense and sexual. Ending was slightly unsatisfying but still happy ending
Oops nevermind I didnt properly read the last chapter. Mc deadass beat up a whole group of gangsters. I take back what I said about him not knowing how to fight
He lowkey pisses me off
Not lowkey though
He DOESSSSSSS ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
Lowley is an understatement
So these are the children of Delico’s Nursery when they are older? Do the twins, Elena and Lucia, ever appear? I really want to see what they look like now. They were my favourites among the children
Unfortunately, no
The Lorca family also has just appeared for the first time in Delico's Nursery, so iirc there's no other Lorca in the other series, yet
The story is kind of confusing but is at the same funny? But at the same time makes me cringe? It only has 5 chapters so not much for me to comment on. All I can say for now is that this story is for people who like comedies and who dont look too much into the plot. Art style is nice.
Wasn’t the worst story I’ve ever read. The story felt slow but at the same time rushed? The ml and mc didnt seem very convincingly in love either. I’d reccomend reading this story if you’re bored and just want to pass time. The art style is cute.
Why did she suddenly trauma dump?? Her being neglected as a child had nothing to do with her meddling with the village chief’s life. Atleast that’s what it seemed like to me. Am I missing something?
I suddenly understand how my english teachers feel when grading my essays and my explanation has nothing to do with my point loll
I legit thought her trauma dump was gonna be like "I came back because the girl I liked left me for a man" not my parents are awful and I'm lonely. Like this is giving 2+4= 6742. Make it make sense!
At the start of the story, uke sneaks vodka into the seme’s drink. And tries to have sex with him, taking advantage of the fact that seme wasn’t in his right mind. Is that not sexual assault or idk rape???
IT VERY MUCH IS!!
Why’s she always screaming? It gets a bit annoying. Artstyle is really cute though.
For sure it's her inner reactions. No need to tone down something the characters cannot see.
Mc is stupid, ML is an asshole. The beginning was promising. Went downhill from there.
Had a happy ending and the relationship between Eddie and Jay was quite wholesome and respectful.
The plot made me go “…??” in several parts but if you read without thinking too hard, you’ll enjoy it