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stories like these are edging me goddamn

I should let this marinate but it's so good ( T﹏T )┛

Hmm.

It ended.

I was exasperated while reading the last few chapters. This is... a story... fr. I'm trying to think back without re-reading it, what the hell was that about?

Terribly plot-defective. (This was line was translated from Japanese. They got some sick verses hahaha went for the throat.)

First, they gang-raped him. There were spectators PLUS they sold his damn tapes.

WHERE IN THE FUCK ARE THE ADULTS?

I think, that's the biggest plothole there is. Cutting out a whole ass age range. Incredibly convenient for the plot.

You know, I kind of understand it. Them not condemning those motherfuxkers. Cause it was not him. He was not the one that got raped. And so I can see he wants to throw some punches but it wasn't that serious for him because he wasn't personally involved. The world can be messed up like that. But it's still shitty though.

For all that he did go through for the original owner of the body you'd think he'd want him to be given justice. But in the end there wasn't even an altercation. Just a threat. They just let evil deal with another evil. And they live their lives. Respect, deadass. Live your life, pookie.

Anyway, I got to mention this because I kinda got secondhand embarrassment. Pookie said he planned it all. But got his lover licked in the neck, battered, and kneeling. Yep. Sounds like a plan well thought out. Planned to protect, huh? Silly.

That scene could've been better honestly. It feels like it popped out of the blue when the characters are foreshadowing it so hard. It wanted it to be GRAND. But it didn't even raise from the ground. You're telling me with all that that was what came out of it?

Rape, bullying, manipulation, mental illness, bystander effect, social heirarchy, nature vs nurture, trauma bonding, and many more. Those are a lot of topic to get from. To write a scene from. It let me down.

It's like it was controlled. the scene. The author didn't let it free. I could feel it being gripped. Always just threading along the topic not ever confronting it. And I wished, I always wish these for stories. But I hope those who can write isn't afraid to write.

There are people out there who might not have enough tools with them to fight the evil things in the world. Through stories people can learn. Instead of letting it go why not step unto the mud for once? Let the ugly be seen. Let it bring chaos. Let it bring discourse. Make people think. Make them mad. Make them feel heard.

It feels like people are afraid to write because when the public finds a target they'll run them through the ground. Always the safe option. Always the milder take. Always holding back.

I'm straying.

Haha

This was good but it could've been more.

I shouldn’t have read this at this point in my life. I’ve read several stories now but here I am writing this particular story a comment cause it ticked me off when I promised myself to look on to the positive things in life.

Anyway, I was planning to go off on this story but mann why was I expecting adult problem-solving when these are kids. Ticked me tf off when I haven’t thought of it that way honestly. These are some dramatic people quite honestly.

Especially that Jinwook(?) Bruh that kid. I didn’t even read that bg story other than it was a snoozefest, what a fucking prick that one. I can’t be in that one’s mind. I’d puke. Imagine creating your own poison then blaming other people hahshahaha sick ass motherfucker. If someone actually defends him under my comment go to another dimension and kiss his ass bruh. I’m so appalled by him, i’d be appalled by his fans too. I’d comment more but I haven’t finished the story. I’m at chap 48 so I don’t want to put a dot Dot on it yet.

Anyway, you really can tell that the mc is a fucking dumbass. But like he can’t help it really. You can’t help choosing bad decisions when you’re dumb, you don’t have the right braincells for it, ya know? Yeah, but shit bruh he lived in the fucking streets all his life. Went on to live his life interacting with people. Surely you’d develop some instincts and life-preservation.

Ticked me off when he followed that Joohoon WHILE KNOWING WHAT HE DID WHAT HE CAN DO AND WHAT HE MIGHT DO

WHILE KNOWING THE BODY HE’S IN IS IN NO CONDITION TO PREVENT ANYTHING OR EVERYTHING THAT’S ABOUT TO HAPPEN.

I can’t be that dumb, right? I refuse to be that dumb. Anyone shouldn’t be that dumb. And he got save by the ml. How though? Like a fucking miracle. ML immediately knows where he is. When (we were given context) they don’t know each other. mc didn’t mentioned him. And the timeframe wasn’t quite right but like manga logic bruh I hated that. I would’ve been impressed if he used his street smarts SENSING DANGEROUS PEOPLE but no bruh he really went in to TALK. What a fucking idiot but yeah what can he do really. The author branded him that. An idiot that knows how to throw a punch that has seen the dark side of life but is a naive virgin. Well, people can be that.

But yeah disregard the years he’s been crawling just to get by. You can’t tell me he was out there without his brains bruh surviving for 18 years. And now that he is in highschool with a bunch of kids… you’re telling me he lost all that braincells? Ticked me off that one scene really. And many more but it’s the character the author wanted him to be… it was consistent.

But idk I sense something but I can’t pin it down. Maybe because I haven’t read it yet. Hmm. That’s a long ass comment for something I haven’t even finished ticked me off I couldn’t restrain myself to yap.

I really don’t know what to make out with this story. It’s such a weird vibe. Idk.

Been away for too long and this is what i read.

Ngl it’s hot. The kissing scene is top- tier mannn but bruh what was that?

And it’s completed already??

Because it was so short it didn’t root on me at all.

I just stayed for the plot cause the people were saying it’s sad. And I’m supposed to be emotionally unstable cause it’s my red days but dang this did nothing lol. Maybe because I just ate? So maybe I’m in a good state of mind? Am trying to understand what went wrong, why is this is just meh to me? Hmm.

I was going to drop it on chap 5(?)6(?) but when I looked it was just a short story I stayed and that didn’t made it any better nor did it add to anything really.

So spoilers ahead… I’m gonna dissect this or something

So basically Heewon altered this guy’s life like some god. And Mugyeong(?) fell in his trap thinking the spider that owned the web was the saviour that was going to get him out of it. But as he struggle to get out, the more the web sticked to him entangling him even further until he can no longer move. That was when Heewon decided to show his real self.

I wish this was climactic like I just described but it was so short it couldn’t be anything more. But the story had potential. It just needed for chapters. A more fleshed out plot.

Idk really. It wasn’t given depth so I can’t sympathize. I love me some possessive and obsessive seme but this seme didn’t make the cut didn’t make me feel “it” that delicious tingly feeing of over-indulging.

He felt pathetic. ill. Pitiful.

He was just an empty husk with a human form. Craving for love cause he doesn’t have any. Funny because he was supposed to have been raised in a “happy” household. His mother may be a bit twisted but she made his dad happy and in turn the dad was the healthy kind of loving. It may have been the genes. Begs me to ask the question, nature vs nurture? Haha.

But yeah, it was done before anything concluded. Like already folding the clothes while it’s still being washed.

It’s like the author wanted to be mysterious but honestly it just tastes stale. With a love for something psychological and the power to make stories author could have done wonders honestly. Rarely does something this serious be heavily tackled but like that princess rap battle song line, “it’s like you always choke once you make it to the balls.”

Had the potential “but like a pornstar, you blew it.”

Don’t take this seriously y’all I got me some serious case of yappinglitis.

THAT CHAPTER ONE WAS SCRUMPTIOUS AND I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT SCRUMPTIOUS MEAN i had to look it up IT CAME OUT OF MY SOUL

SCRUMPTIOUS ლ(´ڡ`ლ)

THE BABYYYYY ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ

I WANTED TO SEE THE BABYYYY ┗( T﹏T )┛

I should' ve let this marinate some more.

ISTG THAT FUCKASS I WILL RIP HIS SKIN OFF HIS FACE

This was a good read.

Spoiler. Go away. Will review.

I don’t usually do this. With the amount of smut I’ve gone through I am probably immuned to many forms of love progressions. Even often times I love me some twisted romance. But this one.

This one. This one somehow made me sick. This one’s sick. Like I (a smut enthusiast) was not even reading the smut at all. And I tried... tried to.. like .. get hook cause maybe this got some banging smut but bruh I could not even read dem smexy times.

I just skimmed through allat to see the plot.

And boy was the uke empty in the head.

I did not read it properly so don't quote me. Maybe he was passable(?)

But bruh why he scared of him taking picture of his id?
He's a university student, right?

BRUH

You've got to be some mindless fucker going through COLLEGE WHILE being in a rental boyfriend hussle TO BE SCARED OF SOME UNIVERSITY ID. I couldn't do it. I can't forgive this type of stupidity. On top of being scared of digital footprint which btw

JESUS I CANT BELIEVE THIS SHIT

He has WHOLE ASS NAME AND AGE IN THE RENT A BOYFRIEND WEBSITE. He got threatened to let this man (WHOM HE CAUGHT DOING SOMETHING ILLEGAL) EXPLORE HIS ASS. IF i become this dumb, please kill me.

Not only did he not think that 'ahh, maybe he'll not actually upload my INSIGNIFICANT INFORMATION THAT'S OUT IN THE PUBLIC ANYWAYS cause it's illegal and I could get this EMPLOYED ADULT THAT HAS A BUSINESS JAIL TIME. He even praised him for, well, fraud.

Go figure.

Anyway, seme searched his hole like the gentleman he is. BUT Let's not stray away from the POINT in all of this. It was to make a review for the blog. Now please tell me. Which product are we testing rn? Oh the fingers. Ohwaw. Test drive, yuh?

Scrumdillayumyumapurrpurr~

Anyway, he got the booty call while scared out of his mind about the whole information leak. Idk why he didn't have half or even 1/4 the brain to actually gather evidences. Or make a paper trail for this in like the police station or something like you know the place where people serve to protect. But I digress. That's not the point, OKAY? The PLOT THICKENS. or does it?

Well yes, cause seme over here just wanted to bring excitement to people's lives, he tells the uke while literally digging in his ass. I-. Totally. What a saint. *heart eyes*

He then got threatened again to wear lingerie. And got his picture taken. Idk really what he's afraid of.

1. His name is attached to a rental app that people automatically think has a "heaven" option.
2. Lingerie pictures in the hands of other people.
3. Being straight his whole life and now has a stranger digging his ass.

He's actually... well. He's himself that's for sure.

...

You might be thinking it's uke I didn't like. Yes.

But, the seme. A menace. Not like in a cool way society has attached this word to.

You're telling me. This ADULT MAN, rented A 21 YEAR OLD UNIVERSITY TO TEST OUT SEX TOYS? Bro didn't even need the rental boyfriend. He could've gotten a prostitute at least they KNOW but dead ass chose an unsuspecting college student who is READY FOR A DATE to get his ass explored and even wants feedback for the review cause OF THE FUCKING COURSE ITS FOR THE BLOG.

I can't even begin to explain how sick it is to lie to make your likability increase just for the sole purpose of violating that person. The seme came to this full knowledge of what he's going to SAY AND DO. He KNOWS coming to this he's going to threaten this 21 year old LATER manipulate the situation to get his personal info in order for him to get what HE WANTS.

I CAN'T STRESS THIS ENOUGH HE KNOWS HE WILL DISREGARD THIS PERSON'S AUTONOMY JUST TO FULFILL HIS WANTS.

But nvm all that. he got hard omg *heart eyes* saur excited for the next chapter.

sick motherfucker.