
alright, i have read countless of stories just like this one, but as of right now i really feel disgusted by the manipulation and the rapist attitude. I cant even see their chemistry. They just look like brothers to me, i cant see any romance at all. There was no time frame for realization or any character change. its dumb, well it supposed to be funny and dumb, but it just cringes the hell out of me. plus why would you think of a fucking old guy as a five years old and then let him fuck you??????? beyond disgusted, again, i have seen shits and i know some fans doesnt seem to mind cause they are just two love birds, i know, i've been there, but i cant unfathom this one, sickening...
but maybe thats just me now...

okay i dunno about u guys whether the mc is dumb or not has different reasons, but what i notice about this story was the storytelling itself. with chapter 1, everything was explained and detailed than a usual plot line, but what i kind of dont like with whats happening is that the mc will be busy telling us who is who and what is happening or what has happened. and we are bombarded with the mcs hindsight, i understand that every story does that. but somehow with her current pessimistic and passive aggressive attitude, somehow it feels overwhelming

i'd like to think that he tian and lil mo got in a kind of like an argument or like they were seperated by some sort of fate, then lil mo started to have a less thug life with the other 2 by his side, he decided to try to forget he tian. but years later, he tian reappered barely finishing his "gang" or like i dunno his family duties??? and now he's tryna work things with lil mo
and now we marinate once again