
The story is full of cliches, silly plot and even too ideals BUT if you just want to enjoy the fluff and cuteness! This will be up your alley! And as fluff girlie, I'm here for it! I mean sometimes I can't even help myself but roll my eyes but all in all I just want the children to be happy and enjoyed the cuteness! Because damn it they're so cute

If they handle the two souls in one body better... Like I think it'll be better if it's more like a split personality, obv the real split personality doesn't work like that, but it'll make more sense because both side of him doesn't like their opposite side which is why to him, it's like a different people (or can't see clearly when they're switching) even though it still him (at first I thought that's what they're going for)
And if they can bond the human side more, that'll be also good, like maybe make them closer until the girl actually call the human side Eiji as well, then the ending would be much more satisfying!
But anyway, as far as smut story it is what it is I suppose (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
It's so fucked up yet it's so interesting, now this is dark romance...... I mean their "love" that is, the whole thing is def psychology horror ahahahaha