
What happened to the shivering kitten she went to get a blanket for?? I can’t believe she just forgot about it like that.
After the ML pulled the stunt with the golf ball, any attraction to him realistically would've died. But whatever, the story has to story.
Her boobs without nipples look like balloons.
Ok yes imma still read it but I’m allowed to complain.

I know it's fiction, but it's 2025. Can authors stop writing anal sex like this? It honestly, takes away from the story. I know things get prettied up for the ease of readers, but it's hot when they do anal and use lube and stretch their partner out. Just shoving it in always makes me cringe. That's not how that hole works. (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Honestly, the way the male lead thinks is messed up. He isn’t a good person. But I know he’s end game. I do complain, but I’ll still read it.