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aka mpreg fixes all

It doesnt have a bad plot, it had 1 rape chapter between the uke and unrelated characters and the plot points that followed kept that very conscious. The grandpa doesnt wanna kill him, but wanted to torture him, that's why I think it made sense, and people can skip the chapter if they feel so triggered.
This feels so much like a double standard cus Love is Illusion, Hate or Love Me, etc all include rape between the main couples and people just dont care, and I don't understand why it's so different when the rape isn't even between the main couple.

bro he got gangraped mind you, and yes it could have been necessary for the plot but it was glossed over in a matter of 2-3 chapters when other more minor issues compared to it are so over-arching. For example, the seme’s trauma to bullying, such an integral part to the plot, addressed multiple times in the story - good. Uke getting gangraped - make-up sex LIKE.

Fine let’s ignore that cuz wtv alright, objectively this has bad writing bruh go read peak and you’ll understand

In reality, this was a mid story but like good enough yaoi or smth

I have read peak (You and I Cant Do This, No Moral, Nerd Project, etc) and I've even read like 2 good omegaverse (forgot the name but think it was How My Dad's met or sumthin?), but this story was well written compared to other omegaverses, except the Dad's one, that 1 was a fucking masterpiece. You might bring up a story like Kiraide Isasete, but I thought the relationship was stereotypical so I found that mid and stretched as well. This however has a unique relationship dynamic and an actual plot besides just "meet, hold back pouncing on omega in heat (or dont), confront ex, have kids"

It's not objectively bad written, I feel that people like you cant get over the gangrape chapter, which is fair. The gangrape was not glossed over in 2-3 chaps bro. This was done to make us hate the grandpa even more. Once again I'll bring up, what else could the grandpa have done to torture his grandson/assert his dominance/let him know just how weak he is as a recessive? ANOTHER thing, I hate when people compare that scene to just regular make up sex, the uke was trying to get rid himself of the dirtyness/pheromones of the other guys who raped him.

All in all, for a bl? Ig the plot could be considered a bit mellow, it prolly deserves the psychological tag, but for an omegaverse, it has quite the unique plot compared to others.

Damn I typed a lot

Also the reason why the bullying is addressed more than the gangrape is cuz it is part of the bigger picture. The whole story revolves around the hatred of recessives. Even the gangrape shit is part of it.

Nahh

THAT WOULD BE A VALID AND INTERESTING CRASHOUT
I SUPPORT

Yeah saw that. Hated it but… it was kinda hot.

I mean it was all in the past but still

holy shit

Wait there are ACTUALLY chapters of that? I thought that the previous person was just making assumptions.

Yep. It was very detailed. I only read raws but they were definitely in love.

Gonna let this brew for a while, but did he cheat on Fabian later? Please let me know if you read more. Thank you.

So far, nope. The season ended with Jerome "dying" in there mission back then. So we have to wait but I really hope K wouldn't.