old man tryna scare the english-speaking fellow away, I see!! (I think, lol)
Anyway, I love this. Wouldn't mind more horror elements tbh now that we've introduced THAT into the mix.
and so, so, so corny aaaaaaa
This isn't bad necessarily. It's a very typical isekai story. So far the plot and the characterizations seem a bit lackluster, as if it's written by someone who just wanted to write an isekai story but didn't really have any of their own ideas for it. So it's very much a copy-paste of many other stories of its kind. But definitely not the worst!
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One scene tho that to me was cringy was when she went to the information guild and used coded language by saying "I'm here to buy some red milk for the cat", and when the clerk asks her what's the red milk called, she says "information". And that's just... like, wtf is the point of using coded language at that point?? And everything the follows is just so childishly written.
Overall this is easy reading, and I think it'd be very enjoyable to someone who isn't too used to isekai stories - that way it will feel new and interesting rather than dated. The art is nice too, and so far there aren't any characters that you just hate.
go on, u pretty lil cutie, collect another one. Sure they all look almost identical, but a win is a win.
again with the trust going up and down, like catch a goddamn breath. Is this the only way the author knows how to generate suspense? :////
Right it so annoying. Wtf do you mean your suspicious of her she literally risked her life for all of them and gave him a cure for his sister you should be n her debt not accusing her. How fickle(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
yep! And as soon as that gets resolved, in the next breath smth else will pop up and she'll be accused of smth again. It's getting tiresome.
Just started, at chapter 5: How you gonna rape someone twice and say "we both take the responsibility for this"???
Also his ex needs to burn in hell. The glimpses of him and what he did to MC make me wanna hurl.
I like the MC. I wish him the best, and even though I know the story is probably going to be full of angst, for now I'll hang on to see how he survives.
Chapter 7: "how can he change his mind so easily" does this monumental moron of an alpha not realize that the level or rationality is different when an omega is in heat vs. when they're not? Like, I don't think Dojin has bad intentions, but at least for now he seems to look at everything through a very privileged alpha perspective. And harm caused by ignorance is still harm.
Chapter 9: Okay, at least there're some apologies and acknowledgements of wrongdoings. That's way more than what we usually get in the genre. Also Yulha saying "I'm very annoying" hurts my heart because every single person who has told me that they're annoying, has eventually turned out to have had people in their past who kept treating them as if they were.
Chapter 13: I still think that the way Dojin acted in the beginning is absolutely horrid and ppl defending him are questionable at best. That said, I also think that MC needs to be loved clearly and unconditionally for him to start healing. That doesn't mean ignoring his boundaries, of course, but at least right now Dojin is very clear about his interest, even if it's currently at the level of "taking responsibility" and not "I like you as a person".
Chapter 15: Yulha is ADORABLEEEEE and I will actually beat that ex with a crowbar.
Chapter 17: Piss off, glasses freak. Also Dojin you're losing points fast again.
Chapter 19: Yulha is FULLY within his rights to not want to see you anymore. I am glad tho that he revealed what his ex did (even if not in detail). I think Dojin should know what exactly is Yulha's trauma for him to understand why he responds a certain way. Also the translation took a nosedive so let's see how this goes.
Chapter 20: The friend is right in many ways in what he's saying about not every alpha being bad and that MC can't let every memory shut him down, but idk it feels a bit dismissive towards Yulha's trauma. "Hey I know your ex prostituted non-consensually, and was generally very abusive towards you and that the next alpha you interacted with assaulted you like 4 times, but I'm having a good relationship with an alpha so that debunks your fears." Then again maybe the friend doesn't know the extent of what happened?
Chapter 22-23: Oof Dojin undoing the little good work he did before. Congrats on retraumatizing Yulha I guess. The good thing is that maybe (???) it forced Yulha to be decisive on their relationship?? Also I hope Yulha's ex will SUFFER. I hope he suffers so much he regrets being born, omg.
Chapter 30: HIS LIDDOL FEET *sob* Yulha is adorable, and I really hope that him and Dojin can keep their current dynamic going. Despite his flaws (AND ACTIONS!! I haven't forgotten how we started) Dojin is somehow still less toxic than the vas majority of semes out there.
Okay now I've read everything there is so far, and I'm honestly looking forward to reading more purely because of Yulha. I want to see him happy.
easiest 5 stars I've ever given. Omg. Love it so, so, so, so much. What a PERFECT ending, too.
I was enjoying this in the beginning, but now it feels like the art is getting worse and the story isn't making up for any of it. There's no development, and the only events that happen are just placeholder events copied from other similar stories that add nothing to the plot (if there even is one). And tbh that's not a bad thing necessarily - some stories can be definitely enjoyed just as a recounting of a character's daily life, without a driving plot. But I guess I've just lost interest in this now.
i see their squabbling as sibling antics, but it could be just that I'm refusing to see it. IDK. I enjoy their interactions, and I really don't want to be wrong about this hahah (i feel like so many isekai/otome stories are wayyyy too easygoing with things like blood relation and minors). Anyway, I want the dark haired guy to be the ML, and I want the blondie (original ML? The prince?) to pine after her.
All that aside, I'm LOVING the creepy vibes that come with Conrad. What an interesting sub plot!! I also like the FL and pretty much all the women who've had speaking roles so far - no one yet is annoying (though I do anticipate and dread the presence of a white lotus green tea girl in the future).
I had to give up because her tail was giving me the ick.
I don't think the story is bad (altho I never made it to the latest chapters), and the art is hella cute (usually). I just really can't stand that gross tail she's got going on.