A continuation of this story would definitely need to be 90% smut. She said how she loves yandere characters. Just lean into that. This MC is no use for any other plot.
I get MC tried hard to change her image from villainess to good, but she's really a goody-goody. Story glossed over it that she was scared outta her mind getting threats at first. But then she became so complacent about it and getting kidnapped.
Well maybe she went back to thinking its really all just a game and nothing bad will happen to her. In that case, why condemn the body guard for beating up her kidnappers??
But then she wanted him to not beat up the stalker who was actively kidnapping her as well. Girl... Get the fuck on somewhere. Yeah, this MC is not cut out for a whole story of this over and over. I was already wanting to drop, and WOULD'VE drop this if it were any more chapters. At least have a fucking backbone. I can't stand MCs who never want to cause any harm "it's bad to hurt ppl..." but then everyone can stomp all over you... She has literally no boundaries or spine. This should just stay a few chapters of pure smut.
Nah, the translation is TOO confusing on Ch 15. I can sometimes figure out when they're saying "me" instead of "you", but this was just a whole nother level, and Idk wtf is supposed to say, but I know it's not that.
The pages are all out of order. Certain sections flow, but then it's all jumbled again. I couldn't get into it because of that
Wherever y'all got Chapter 16, send it back. Expeditiously.
Like I couldn't even get halfway through the chapter. Someone please reupload with whoever was translating before. I don't want quick chapters, I want legible chapters. So stop just uploading random ones you find God knows where.
I think the story got weird. Like it was strange before, but now... What are we even doing?
I've said it on an image I've saved, but THIS is why Otome Isekai girlies always be like "omg, ML like me??? But you're supposed to like the OGFL!!! The plotttttt!!!", because a lot of old OIs had where the characters can't break from their roles. The plot affects their minds to where they either black out and move mechanically according to their roles, or have extremely urges to follow the plot and love FL and hate Villainess.
There are even some where its the FL herself that has some crazy charm that the MLs just can't resist. That seems to be the case here. Everything is fine as long as he doesn't look at OGFL.
So ofc there are newer otome isekais what the villainess thinks the ML will just abandoned them if he comes face to face with the FL, so they try to run away before they get hurt like that.
I enjoy both situations: Plot is King & Dynamic World. I would like to see new manwhas go back and adopt the "Plot gonna plot" setup (like July Found by Chance). I just don't be seeing them so that anymore. I guess they've completely moved from that, but the "omg ML is destined to..." Is getting old now too. So go back and mix it up.
It's nostalgic to read plots like this again. But now I prefer webcomic style over manga.
This is what I was expecting from [Koketsu Dining] https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/koketsu_dining/ but it was shounenai Slice Of Life, not furry fucking... Hyuuga shoulda put it on him.
Anywho, I was recommended to read this. So here we go
I was surprised to see negative comments. The saintess isn't even on the cover and doesn't even make an appearance for quite a few chapters. This story is obviously about Yuri, Allen, older brother, and Claire. They're literally the ones on the COVER.
Also, Yuri is 17 and 100% acts like a spunky teenager enjoying life with no rules. I clocked it that she must be a kid and not like an Office Lady transmigrator (who often times are written even worse than her!!). I think the story does a good job bc plenty of teenagers IRL act like her or even more rash, immature, or spoiled. She's reckless, but also has moments where she uses her **still developing** cognitive skills. Shes not a grown woman or a genius, just a teenager trying to do what she thinks will be best for her faves.
And now, she finds out that all her efforts may be in vain. She's a teenager who wouldn't even have her own life in Korea figured out, so ofc she'll struggle with trying to understand how to go about dealing with a world that'll be actively against her happiness and the life of her Favorite ppl.
Yuri isn't my fave OI protagonist, but she's not bad at all. I'm okay with how she acts because she's actually a minor! I have no tolerance for other MCs who act immature or like they're a kid when they're full grown women in that body. This story ain't that.
This!! I also personally like to headcanon that one's physical body affects the person as well, even if they have memories of another life - so not only was her brain & everything developing before transimigration, now she's in a body of an even younger child. Considering all that, I think the story os doing a good job portraying her.
I think about that too. I like when the manhwa specifically states "why am I crying? Why am I sleepy? Why am I easily distracted? Why have my taste buds changed? I must be affected by the body I'm in." But if the story doesn't highlight this issue even once, they do be getting a side-eye from me. Like c'mon... at least remind me why this grown woman is being so childish and fighting with little ass kids lol.
There's so many OI where you totally forget MCs were even isekai'd. Like it could've just been a regular childcare manhwa because the "past life" is so irrelevant. But this manhwa is doing a good job on that front as well.
SN: I do get frustrated with Claire. But here's to hoping the story has some growth and healing for her. It'll take time though, so I'm trying to be patient with her and her trauma.