The FL has moments where its like she's operating on ONE braincell. I can see that annoying me in the future bc its kinda irking me now. But the concept of Caesar being able to see the visions when he touches her is interesting.
I think I'm still with it as the story progresses. I don't feel lost or anything, just the right amount of "in the dark" until the story unfolds some more. I really like it. Its pretty interesting and a good sprinkle of creepy.
I think I like it bc it's almost giving me I Am A Hero vibes. Not the weird "loser" MC, but the strangeness of the story progression where things are more than they initially seem. I would constantly binge read that back in the day.
Read until Ch 5.
This feels like some 14 year old's journal/Wattpad.
Also, forgot to mention how her dresses don't suit her at all. Maybe they'll get her a visionary tailor later on who will find/"invent" a style that doesn't fight her like that. She has NO shoulders or boobs, and these dresses do nothing for her.
The empire waist one did, which might make sense since apple-shaped plus size bodies tend to favor that silhouette. That's if you follow the five shape archetype.
But technically, her body shape is to "bell", part of the twelve shape archetype.
See: Hillary Clinton, Adele, Mindy Kaling.
The translation was rough as all hell, but I'm going to add this and see what happens with it. The art is okay, which scares me more since it's still a promo. Who knows what art it'd get published with...
I can't even read this because it's a damn shame. Like the art doesn't do this justice at all. SO many different art styles would've suit this better. Like it finally gets worked on just to see it get turned into this disappointment.
i wish the promo art was the permanent art :( and wish the translation was for humans lol
They have really been forcing Daniel down our throats, and its really NOT GIVING!!! Like, its not giving what its supposed to AT ALL. And its leaving a bad taste in my mouth. Like he just comes off sooooo greasy and sleazy. And it's also giving Litia a bad look imo. Each update makes me less interested, and that saddens me.
I was so hype about this webcom. And I was rocking with it RIGHT UP UNTIL Daniel and Litia started hanging out and she was spouting BS while drunk at the pub. The story never recovered from that "WTF goin awnnn", jarring, confusing vibe ever since.
Ash is the realest, baddest bitch!! She's is on the cover, so she BETTER be sleeping or temporarily unconscious. Bc if not, tell me who I gotta fight...
2nd, YESSS here we gooooo
Aww whyy i really want ash to be a guy （￣へ￣）
You ruini ruining it
She's still cool and the best EVER. And I still love her the same as before!
but..... ppl keep calling HER a he/him.
Put some respeck on her name LOL
There are pages missing from CH 3. I came here to read this webcomic because of the screenshots someone posted on OtomeIsekai subreddit. And those pages are missing!!!!
Hernan asks what else she likes, she stares at his chest and blurts out "Your ches-".
So what other pages are missing from this and other chapters? The translation is a little bad... But damn, you can't be missing pages like that. It's already a choppy read, and now it's even more choppy with stuff missing. I'ma hold off on reading this here.