I wish the author would have given seme the opportunity to open up to uke about WHY he was hesitant about sex and maybe talk a little more about his vulnerabilities and past experiences with secretaries, but all in all it wasn’t too bad. The makeup scene kept me from a higher rating. The seme says “I got jealous when I remembered I’m just one of your clients” and uke didn’t actually refute that at all or offer any reassurance to him. Maybe a response like “actually I see you as more than just a customer” or “I like you too” would have been nice. Kinda bothered me a bit.
Oh, surprise surprise. The super obvious playboy top pretends to be a bottom to get the other top alone, then forces him to switch his preference. Havent seen THAT plot trope a million times. *eyeroll*
I saw something about the “pee” being magical or something and tasting like honey. i wonder if that takes the whole fun out of it being a p*ss kink? The “dirtiness” and taboo/ naughty nature of watersports is kinda the whole point, but it’s just going to be juice basically? Eh…..I dunno
I wish the author would have given seme the opportunity to open up to uke about WHY he was hesitant about sex and maybe talk a little more about his vulnerabilities and past experiences with secretaries, but all in all it wasn’t too bad. The makeup scene kept me from a higher rating. The seme says “I got jealous when I remembered I’m just one of your clients” and uke didn’t actually refute that at all or offer any reassurance to him. Maybe a response like “actually I see you as more than just a customer” or “I like you too” would have been nice. Kinda bothered me a bit.
Yes!! I had the exact same thoughts reading this