
1. I don't like the character development in this story. Kim Dan just seems like a sad character. I like the art ofcourse but unlike BJ Alex where the characters would just draw the reader in, this seems to miss something. I could be wrong ofc, but I can't quite connect with jaekyoung or dan or even the actor. Potato seems interesting but that's about it.
2. Mr. Joo is so handsome oml. Maybe because this chapter has more closeups of him but damn! He's hawt. The head to body ratio seems a lil weird, like the head is too small for the body and the neck but maybe because he is shown as bulky and big.
Weeelll see y'all next month!

Yeah! The artstyle is so pretty but I think there’s something missing too. BJ alex characters be like “Wowwwww!! DAMNN!!! So fking hot!! OMG!!! Sheeshhhhhh!! YEAHHH!!! DADDY!!!” but Jinx be like “Woahhh…the artstyle is so pretty” & that’s it. Idk if u understand but there’s nothing left after reading this.

I admit that I don't remember all the chapters. But wasn't there a scene where they fucked on the conference room or maybe the dining room table and managed to hide it seconds before their mom came in. Now yisoo had ages to come up with an excuse, like he was sick or something.
Ofcourse the mom is being a total bitch since the very beginning. She has forced him into numerous situations by emotionally blackmailing him, but this was just plot convenience.
Cover your mouth to keep you from screaming while i fuck you. ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄