“Why did you eat his wee wee?” and that, my friend, was the day he had lost his innocence HAHAHAHAH
After re-reading this, I realized some things I HATED about this story
RAPE
• I don’t care If you stop midway but that’s still sexual assault. Then Yuuma and Hakumei talked it out as If they’re the only people involved uuhhh...excuse me but there’s a victim?
If you both had an issue, just keep it between the both of you, why did you have to get Aoi involved that way? Why did Aoi had to apologised? for what? for getting raped? The issue was just swept under the rug just like that? wtf
• I hated how Hakumei was passive(?) during the whole story. His lack of presence was annoying and how he just pushed Yuuma to Aoi for god knows what reason and then when his brother assaulted the person that he likes, he just didn’t care much.
• Hakumei & Aoi development was lacking, I actually though It would be Yuuma and Aoi in the end because they’ve spent more time together until that rape part
• Lastly, I would never entrust a child to someone who raped me. That’s for sure.
The story was great and I understand the part where Tachibana needed a support during his rough times, i’m but still intrigued about what kind of relationship he had with that girl, I know she was their for “support” but like....how far did they go?
The ending was beautiful ngl
Ok here’s why I can’t stand their relationship. I know Riku had a low self-esteem and to some it can be annoying, but what I can’t stand at all is how Yoshimi treated him. Because somehow I understand Riku’s fear of being with a person you have initially known as someone who sleeps around, of course that would make you feel insecure about your relationship because at the end of the day if you break up with him, he would still have some spares.
Yoshimi was already expecting Riku to be assertive in the relationship which is not attainable for a person with a lot insecurities. I also hated how he physically hurt Riku when there’s a misunderstanding, like BOIII...how about you sit down, have a deep talk to your partner first and understand his feelings and fears because the guy knows nothing about relationship then you compromise instead of just using SEX and violence to communicate. I know that Riku also has a responsibility to improve himself and make their relationship work but so as Yoshimi but he only expect Riku to make the effort while doing nothing.
I love the art though and the last chapter, I at least saw development in their relationship.
“In ThE eNd, AnYoNe iS FiNe, aReN’t tHeY?” Said by someone who had slept with most people he employed in the office.
but tbh this ain’t that bad and I personally like it.
It’s the cute child for me, and ONLY THAT. Didn’t feel both couple. they were too forceful. The plot ain’t it.