Artist excels at drawing,but their story telling is choppy. They need an author to help them write and plan the vision of their story better. It’s going to fast and there’s no connection to the reader as to why they should even care about these characters breaking up. The break up and reasoning all happens in 2 chapters of barely knowing anything.
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the Mysterious giant underground labyrinth "Tartaros".There, adventurers day and night ven...
- Author: Kutsugaeru
- Genres: Ecchi / Adventure / Comedy / Fantasy / Shounen / Action / Fantasy / Martial Arts
The art has changed a lot and idk how I feel about it
“This alpha is mine until the day he dies,”
Can’t tell if that’s a death flag or not?! Hello? Σ( ￣□￣||)
Your mom dates a nice guy when you’re like 5 years old and you develop feelings for that same man years later and since your mom is dead. He is officially free game. I can’t imagine how Pilgyun would deal with his feelings if his mom was still alive and wanted to get back with Ryu!
I love the story, don’t get me wrong! I just had that sudden thought cross my mind wondering if Pilgyun would have been more mentally sound if he had gotten extra love he needed from his mom. Just from the little context about her we got, she seemed to have always kept a man until she got sick. But there aren’t any sentimental/happy moments Pilgyun has with his mother in the flashbacks. Poor Pilgyun is love starved. Σ(っ°Д °;)っ
