yeah the pacing is unnecessarily slow and it could have had some parts which were a lot more concise- like i get needing to change pacing based on the part but if it's slow throughout then it's just boring. there's like no impact.
yeah the pacing is unnecessarily slow and it could have had some parts which were a lot more concise- like i get needing to change pacing based on the part but if it's slow throughout then it's just boring. the... feh
Get your hands where? What the heck, what’d I miss in another chapter??!!!