yeah the pacing is unnecessarily slow and it could have had some parts which were a lot more concise- like i get needing to change pacing based on the part but if it's slow throughout then it's just boring. there's like no impact.
yeah the pacing is unnecessarily slow and it could have had some parts which were a lot more concise- like i get needing to change pacing based on the part but if it's slow throughout then it's just boring. the... feh
Reminds me how hard it is being a teen, trying to fit in, how some things can seem like the end of the world. Those years are really rough in general, much worse if you are different in some way to the ‘norm’ in a judgmental setting. Poor guys, it’s just sad
I also don’t. It’s just so long-winded that it feels unnecessary and stalling. Idk.
yeah the pacing is unnecessarily slow and it could have had some parts which were a lot more concise- like i get needing to change pacing based on the part but if it's slow throughout then it's just boring. there's like no impact.
I agree with both of you.