This is way too short, the art is very pretty I must say, but there should've been more conflict here other than their past like the uke should've been a hard to get type and also would've been better if the seme suffered a bit more ¯_(ツ)_/¯ But it's still good
I don't feel that much spark after reading the story but at least their daughter is happy, the seme had been kind of a jerk in the past, he could've asked uke for an explanation but overall i rate this story a 6/10
I love how protective the Ike's sister is (๑•ㅂ•)و✧