I kinda hate hoe hes slowly getting twinkified as chapters progress, chapter 1, he looks like he could pack a punch, and is well fed. But he just so happens to be a fragile doctor with a skinny twink figure
BUT WHAT I HATE THE MOST, IS THE PART WHERE THEYRE EXPLAINING THAT UKE IS **THE** MIST, I got spoiled while READING, a scene where its supposed to be a suprise plot twist just gets ruined. I dont feel any tension at all when Uke was arguing with the doctor that it's "false accusations", ts could've been avoided if their faces werent included.
Tbh i do like sci-fi and since it has some "military base" stuff, the story is fine, its just boring in few parts! Especially the smut
I thought this was an exaggeration, but then I looked at the first and last chapter, and you're right to some extent, but I think it's because the artist's style became more defined and less rougher, less wider. I can see how the uke became more feminine looking, but the seme also became more slender and sleeker as a result of the evolved artstyle
No haru pregnancy process? BUT I LIKE THAT THE ENDING IS IN A POSITIVE NOTE! It felt a bit of a rush since I was hoping for more explanation in the lore, like what happened to the undying hatred in returning to the rabbit kingdom? Would be great if it was slowly build up as haru tries to convince ML more reasons, would make the dramatization of the scenes better!! But since Harus in the throne(?), does he still do his daily activities as usual? I hope hes not actually imprisoned.
Idk if theres gonna be side stories, BUT IM REALLY HOPING THAT ITS ABOUT THE KIDS, HARUS PREGNANCY OR HABIBIS DAILY LIFE!!!
Read this in 1 sitting, WHICH MEANS ITS GOOD ENOUGH FOR MY SHORT ATTENTION SPAN I love this manwha and i love that there's barely any miscommunication between Gabriel and Luke! Ty author for leaving an open ending, but I'm still curious on what Ray's gonna do in the future, live with the lingering feeling for Gab? Marry off a woman? Be fuck-buddied with Angel?? OR MAYBE RAY X ANGEL WOULD BE CANON?!
Besides that, this is such a fun read and i love the comedy. Cant wait to read more of Author-sans works! Ty translators/Translator teams











Koichi pulling everyone including Dyne BITCH PLEASEEE I NEED A PIECE OF THAT MASKED GUARD TOO STOP GATEKEEPING!!!