
I feel like somewhere in this chapter there was poor writing but I can’t quite point it out or confirm cs I’m too tired like something clicked n it kind of made me feel like there’s some shitty writing, and while yes, a lot of people may say it’s the rape part I feel like PLOT wise there was something that kind of ticked me off and came off as sort of poor writing, idk how to explain it so like goodnight

I love this omgg they’re both so cute and although smut is good n all the first time felt unnecessary so when it came to them doing it again at first I was js hoping they would talk it out and shi but ig they did that in a way…not an amazing way but nobody’s perfect ig overall though this was pretty cute def gonna reread for my pretty bird babies
NAW AIN’T NO WAY WE GOT THREE CHAPTERS IN THE SAME YEAR??? I’M FLABBERGASTED BEWILDERED GAGGED SHOCKED SPEECHLESS BAMBOOZLED N A BUNCH OF OTHER WORDS FOR SHOCKED