My man’s a whole entire sink, talk abt a waterfall like okay sprinkler!! Say it don’t spray it pooki..!
The only thing I have to say is that I wish the mother was reported to police, I think an investigation of the home would’ve been enough for them to make their final decision and take Shiraki away. But then again him already being abused and traumatized would only be worse if he ended up in a worse home so I’m just glad it seemed like he got the closure and proper help that he needed in order to begin a new chapter of his life.
I like the way the characters interact with each other and the two main characters dynamic but other than that this shit has a bunch of red flags no joke.
I hope Al and his former fiancée get a chance to properly talk things out. Because it seems like even through all of his own fears and suffering from the beginning he wished nothing but the best for her, I AT LEAST WANT AN EXTRA WHERE THEY SEE EACH OTHER and I love how he described his attachment to her as being a sister to him that is so cute
IF ANYONE KNOWS Can someone please tell me what the flower was supposed to represent, at first I thought it was a forget-me-not but I looked it up and the flower doesn’t match the pictures so what the hell is it?
So if the other guy acted the same way he and his child would still be alive? Bullshit. ML is such a trash bag, what about his other lover?? Like what?? This shit pmo so bad. If he was abandoned then why do the same thing to his poor baby and husband?
IT WAS PUKE?? I THOUGHT IT WAS DROOL OHHHH MY GOSH
WAIT I HAVEN’T READ THIS IN FOREVER AT JUST CLICKED ON THE LATEST CHAPTER. WHAT’S UP WITH THE EGG??
Honest answers y’all, but what do r some thoughts on this story. Js anything idc I’m waiting til the end to form some solid opinions but i wanna hear other ppls if that’s okay.
I think there should be a trigger warning for rape and pedophilia because that’s what it seems like these next few chapters are gonna feature. Also I wanna point out that it’s good that people know ts is wrong and hopefully they know it’s wrong not just simply because of her appearance, I’ve seen all types of irl stories of men being raped and taken advantage of by women and the main reason they weren’t acknowledged or taken seriously is either because the person was a woman and the people around them that they went to told them that they were lucky or the fact that the woman was attractive and people told them to be grateful and whatnot. A on another real note though if a teacher or an adult in power seems you out because they know that you’ll keep quiet please do the opposite, find somebody to tell because seeing this shit happen and knowing that there’s actual real people who have this mindset is so upsetting.
DAWGG I LOVE THIS SM THEY’RE SP CUTE AND OPEN WITH EACH OTHER AND I LOVE HOW THEY JUST ACCEPTED DEFEAT WITH THAT ONE DUDE LIKE UGH IDEK WHAT TO SAY ANYMORE THIS WAS SO SWEET AND AWESOME. Also the “NOOO MY KOU” guy is literally my favorite character he deserved to be in more panels he’s so committed ilhsm omg
I honestly didn’t even waste my time reading chapter four, I skipped to chapter 5 and all of a sudden there were getting it on.. wtf? First of all, a big part of this story I didn’t like was the author making light of Uke/MC’s experiences with being sought out by weird guys, it was played off as a joke and something to laugh at and ultimately being glanced over when shown many examples of it. Which is honestly disgusting because bro’s a whole highschooler and has to deal with that bull, and on top of that his family knows, yet isn’t more precautious about it, even going as far as to say something like “even though he’s a boy he attracts lots of weird guys” or something like that. Second, was definitely the way they portrayed MC’s split personality, kind of again, glancing over that being his trauma response to a really fucked up thing that happened to him, by treating it like it’s his cutesie delinquent personality. Like…brother eugh. And lastly just everything overall, the story wasn’t good, the characters, weren’t good, and the smut was mediocre at best. If you genuinely liked this then sorry to break it to you but a screw or two may be loose in that silly little head of yours.
This honestly made me so mad, like it seems like such a good story with a good build up and decent characters not to mention the smut and it’s all ruined because of the crappy and horrible translation. As well of the quality of some of the chapters being hot ass like man wtf. Hoping that this eventually gets reuploaded with better translation and quality so readers can actually enjoy the story without having to stop and think, “wtf is this?”
I was lwk js skimming for the smut after realizing most of these were js one shots w no plot. But I’m ngl I liked all of these EXCEPT for the twins and coach one. Also the doctor one made me raise an eyebrow because I didn’t see an age mentioned on the patient. Which is a lil scary otherwise the rest of the stories r wtv I kind of got tricked by the cover tho
I have to say, this story was cute. I just wish it had better communication between the two characters. Because it wasn’t like your casual avoidable everyday misunderstandings with these two, their communication was just straight up shit. And as much as I love both uke and seme I wish uke spoke up more without having to have seme stupidly chime in for him the voice his opinions in the worst way possible and I wish seme wasn’t a dick for brains character cs they’re designs r cute as so are they it’s just some lil trinks in the writing here and there.
Girl how the hell is he getting his freak on with a ghost?? Explain pls. Cs first few chapters ain’t do none of that shit. And also love how no one’s talking about how bro saw ghost pooki’s wounds and bruises and didn’t bother to ask him about it, he js kept thrusting and pinched at it. Like nigga what?? And then they js glossed over the scars and abuse all tg like damn