DAWG THIS WAS FIRE, and I’m only saying that about the smut because that’s mostly all I payed attention to. ESPECIALLY AFTER THE BACKSTORY PART OF THE FIRST CHAPTER, I was js kinda like nawww other than that tho this is straight HEAT.
I still can’t quite enjoy reading all the “lovey-dovey” atmosphere that the author is going for simply because of the OG fate of the OG character, that shit’s sad asf dawg and unless he was tricked or cast a spell on or some other stupid shit then it just will continue not to sit right with me, I wish instead of “romance” it was MC getting his get back for the OG character by having them both killed or sumn. Basically a revenge plot because seeing him be so “caring” n shi towards MC isn’t at all sitting right knowing what he does.
Author treated the crazy childhood friend thing WAAAYYYY too lightly, like dude he had a fucking listening device in this man’s home…and so because he cries like a little fucking baby now that he’s been confronted on his delusions we have to feel sorry for him?? Like nigga no, if anything he should be in jail. He’s taken advantage of MC before and bro was literally planning to do it again, he’s disgusting and I’m confused on why he was even introduced in the first place. The mental asylum called, apparently they’d like their patient back..!!
I LOVE TS SO MUCH LOVE HOW ALL FOUR OF THE CHARACTERS MANAGED TO MATCH EACH OTHERS FREAK like that’s honestly all I stayed for cs they had a FIRE 4P not to mention their chemistry as sex partners and as friends LIKE THEY SEPARATE THE TWO IDEK Y I LIKE THAT PART SO MUCH other than that story wise n character wise not much to say…that was kinda ass 4P WAS FIRE THO!!
I just stayed for the sex, I like the way the character’s bodies are drawn and the smut lwk eats but I skimmed over some words every now and again and the husband (Goh) pisses me tf off like why was he all up in MC’s business? That man is grown and you got a whole wife nigga be so Frl.. I was embarrassed for the wife, her husband closeted asf gotta be… cs sumn bout him wasn’t right..
Courtney is already so FWONE but I love when she has those little cutesy moments too that is so adorbs I love her sm. MY GOAT FRL FRL
My man’s a whole entire sink, talk abt a waterfall like okay sprinkler!! Say it don’t spray it pooki..!
The only thing I have to say is that I wish the mother was reported to police, I think an investigation of the home would’ve been enough for them to make their final decision and take Shiraki away. But then again him already being abused and traumatized would only be worse if he ended up in a worse home so I’m just glad it seemed like he got the closure and proper help that he needed in order to begin a new chapter of his life.
I like the way the characters interact with each other and the two main characters dynamic but other than that this shit has a bunch of red flags no joke.
I hope Al and his former fiancée get a chance to properly talk things out. Because it seems like even through all of his own fears and suffering from the beginning he wished nothing but the best for her, I AT LEAST WANT AN EXTRA WHERE THEY SEE EACH OTHER and I love how he described his attachment to her as being a sister to him that is so cute
IF ANYONE KNOWS Can someone please tell me what the flower was supposed to represent, at first I thought it was a forget-me-not but I looked it up and the flower doesn’t match the pictures so what the hell is it?
So if the other guy acted the same way he and his child would still be alive? Bullshit. ML is such a trash bag, what about his other lover?? Like what?? This shit pmo so bad. If he was abandoned then why do the same thing to his poor baby and husband?
IT WAS PUKE?? I THOUGHT IT WAS DROOL OHHHH MY GOSH
WAIT I HAVEN’T READ THIS IN FOREVER AT JUST CLICKED ON THE LATEST CHAPTER. WHAT’S UP WITH THE EGG??
Honest answers y’all, but what do r some thoughts on this story. Js anything idc I’m waiting til the end to form some solid opinions but i wanna hear other ppls if that’s okay.
I think there should be a trigger warning for rape and pedophilia because that’s what it seems like these next few chapters are gonna feature. Also I wanna point out that it’s good that people know ts is wrong and hopefully they know it’s wrong not just simply because of her appearance, I’ve seen all types of irl stories of men being raped and taken advantage of by women and the main reason they weren’t acknowledged or taken seriously is either because the person was a woman and the people around them that they went to told them that they were lucky or the fact that the woman was attractive and people told them to be grateful and whatnot. A on another real note though if a teacher or an adult in power seems you out because they know that you’ll keep quiet please do the opposite, find somebody to tell because seeing this shit happen and knowing that there’s actual real people who have this mindset is so upsetting.
DAWGG I LOVE THIS SM THEY’RE SP CUTE AND OPEN WITH EACH OTHER AND I LOVE HOW THEY JUST ACCEPTED DEFEAT WITH THAT ONE DUDE LIKE UGH IDEK WHAT TO SAY ANYMORE THIS WAS SO SWEET AND AWESOME. Also the “NOOO MY KOU” guy is literally my favorite character he deserved to be in more panels he’s so committed ilhsm omg
I honestly didn’t even waste my time reading chapter four, I skipped to chapter 5 and all of a sudden there were getting it on.. wtf? First of all, a big part of this story I didn’t like was the author making light of Uke/MC’s experiences with being sought out by weird guys, it was played off as a joke and something to laugh at and ultimately being glanced over when shown many examples of it. Which is honestly disgusting because bro’s a whole highschooler and has to deal with that bull, and on top of that his family knows, yet isn’t more precautious about it, even going as far as to say something like “even though he’s a boy he attracts lots of weird guys” or something like that. Second, was definitely the way they portrayed MC’s split personality, kind of again, glancing over that being his trauma response to a really fucked up thing that happened to him, by treating it like it’s his cutesie delinquent personality. Like…brother eugh. And lastly just everything overall, the story wasn’t good, the characters, weren’t good, and the smut was mediocre at best. If you genuinely liked this then sorry to break it to you but a screw or two may be loose in that silly little head of yours.