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This isn't technically a one star read but I'm just so disappointed with the author. Now at first, the story being an absolute mess and making no sense wouldn't matter. This is because the story might just seem like a smexy, for sex only type of bl. However, there's like actual intriguing plots and backstory. For example, why the string got cut and then tied. Why top/blong guy is so desperate to see ghosts and why are main character even wants to act again etc. the author however just goofs everything, are poor baby boy main character dumb as hell. Not cute dumb, not silly dumb, not even annoying dumb but author writing character to do dumb things for no reason. Just because the blonde guy/top wanted to go to the hotel does not mean he had to go to the hotel. No the reason for the hotel isn't just so they can smash because it happened so early on and there will be even easier dumber chances for them to smash anyways. Especially after the MC has leverage over blonde guy/top, that blonde guy wants to see ghosts. He magically doesn't realize that he has leverage, and try to just straight up talk to the guy. Now even if top were to tell MC everything, I'd like to point out the story could still go on. Because MC already sees blonde guys trash, and despite that he needs him so that MC can act. They would still have to meet and smash anyways. I'm just frustrated because this can still be smexy b******* and have an actual story but the author just said "why do that?". And this is just my personal opinion but I feel like those first 15 chapters could have been like 10/20 . We had events that would usually be arcs happened so fast and have no effect on the story whatsoever. I feel like we could have had their interactions be more mysterious and have their chemistry build, cuz no offense there is no chemistry in chapter 6, because it was chapter 6 in the author is maybe new at this who knows?
Sorry for writing a paragraph I just feel like this is such a waste of a solid idea for a BL. I know that apparently blonde guy/top is the worst after looking at comments but still.

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Would give this no stars if I could, but I can't. I don't feel like writing an essay today as to why this is ASS. I stopped like chapter 9 and I really don't care if it's gets better. I don't care if esper/top was kidnapped and had his body ripped apart and then was revived. I don't care about his suffering, or any stupid redeeming that the author might do later. If you want to write bad p*** in smutty stories that's fine but don't try and take yourself seriously and do a whole story. I'd also love to point out that the moment the guide is the bottom, they have no power in the relationship. I've seen in other esper bl's, that the top is the guide and the bottom is an esper. But the moment the bottom becomes a guide it's the worst thing ever. Lol

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Naoki Kujo is an average, run-of-the-mill office worker who can't get any dates. Every time he hears...

Very good but story is a bit all over the place. It is fine at first but it started to feel a bit convoluted after blue rangers death. Explanations of the lore or how things came to be are very stretched out and not fully explained enough. Like will get the dream world arc or competition arc paced perfectly, great story telly, etc but then the in-between bits don't compare. Those arcs/chapters feel fully fleshed out and help me to understand D better growth wise but afterwords everything else is way to jumbled together for me.

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It still has your typical Omega versus tropes but there's a lot more backbone to them. like everybody knows the first time they have sex is because the Omega goes into heat or something in the alpha is"has" to smash to came him down. This time of the Omega was drugged by people who he thought were his friends. The alpha technically only does the dirty because the Omega is a mangaka and heats last week and the deadline is soon. So it was consensual and the comedy, lightens the mood as well.

Kurumizawa, a mangaka and an omega mouse, isn’t fond of his editor Ukano, an alpha fox. He liv...

Lee Yong-ga South Korea is filled with various shitty laws. The group of ‘juvenile kids’...

It was a summer when even breathing was hard due to the heat. The air conditioner in An Kyungsoo...

I like the plot, wish it was longer...
After the fourth chapter I was like, did I miss a whole Arc or something? How did we get here but then it seems like it's a short story BL. Although even for that seems kind of compressed, other than that author gets my type lol.

Returning student, Junseob, lied to his underclassmen that he's dating Seryeong, the campus goddess....

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Some things should just stay on, Wattpad no offense to Wattpad. At least omegaverse knows the majority of it is dumb but like half of this doesn't make any sense. If the blonde dude/top/alpha was an Omega when he was a kid and bottom/black hair is an alpha why did top even become an alpha. Unless he was forced to become an alpha there was no reason to change on purpose. Also why did black haired guy/ bottom have to be an Omega in the first place for them to f*** or be anything together. No matter what Omega versus story it is alphas can be together in any of them. We've seen one where it's Omega-Omega and beta -beta. From what it seems like black haired guy hurt the top in the past but probably not enough to turn bottom into an Omega for no reason. I think it's pretty evident that the bottom has always cared for the top. Why doesn't the top just tell him who he is? If he told him who he was he probably wouldn't have even had to turn him into an Omega and assault him. This just has plot hole on plot hole, and everything that's happening makes no sense. If they just wanted to do Omega versus p*** story that's fine. But how can it only be five chapters in and immediately be like "wtf is happening?". This isn't to say that essay isn't this isn't to say that essay isn't this isn't to say that essay isn't this isn't to say that SA ain't anything new in omegaverse but they clearly cared about each other when they were kids. The bottom is clearly looking for the blonde guy/top and if he had just told him he was they probably would have just ended up as a couple. But apparently and the world BL r@pe is the only form of revenge... Also blonde guy/top was clearly an Omega when he was a kid and went through things. He even talks about it when him and main character are talking about the trait changing drug. So why is he referring to the bottom and just omegas in general in such a depriving way? It just doesn't make any sense to me. Everything is just so contradictory and pointless and frustrating.

I mean the white hair guy / top actually has a solid crazy person backstory. Namn or the guy that we see with the piercing later is hella adorable and Loki perfect for top. I don't even understand why the author put that whole Arc just for us to feel bad for Namin. If they wanted the top to go through all of that it could have just been some s***** person or extra we wouldn't care about. Also bottom or brown-haired guys weirdly enough the craziest person out of all of the characters. If I was a dude and woke up with the vagina, and the person who supposedly did this to me (I don't think there's an explanation for this by the way) who gives a f*** about how society views men I need to go to the hospital. Also this smexy scenes are very smexy in the top despite everything is so adorable. I also like how we were given a top that you know blushes and actually has emotion during sex. It's like 80% of this is technically trash and makes no sense but 20% of it is kind of excellent. I despise the author for this and this review is pointless just like the story that makes no sense.

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Don't really care if that count as spoiler cuz waste of a good story and art... From what I remember they aren't blood related if I'm wrong they half sibling or somethin. Either way sibling romance are always a stupid waste of time.