
I understand what the fuss is about but seriously,this story isn't all that good and the clothes design is even worse. This is one story I will not miss,so yeah keep this on "Tapas" It is not needed here. It's not good enough!

I feel like anyone that uses the argument of “and you could do better” is stupid... like damn people come here to read not to make the stories themselves so of course they gonna critique the shit out of it and quite possibly yea I DO BELIEVE AFTER EIGHT COULD DO BETTER keep in mind I haven’t read the story and I just hate the argument “and you could do any better?”
Please don't say he attacked you!