Very well written story on friendship,love and loss. So sad. Thank you for the update!
For Gods Sake get an artist who can draw children. The kids look older than the father and mother. The story is bad enough,but the art is just so freaking awful!
Sorry but why has this got high ratings when it's just about a slut who has sex with her fiance's brother every time his back is turned. She screams at her fiance to stop and even slaps him yet she will open her legs fast enough for the brother at the same time telling the brother how much in love she is with her fiance and that it is only sex and she will never love him....Crazy Stupid.
I stopped this early on because I found fl dumb and easy. Does she continue to have sex with the brother throughout the series?
For Gods sake Stop with the "Sweetie" I mean what the hell is a kid doing calling an adult woman sweetie for,so annoying!
I ditched this because of the harem crap. I've just popped on to see if there have been any changes, so pleased I did. The harem girls have been helpful,although they don't play much of a part now and are rarely seen. The fighting is fantastic and the different story plots are good. Will continue to enjoy the read. Thank you to the upload!
arhh! I waited ages for this and it jumped two years ahead. What happened in the fight? Who won? I suppose we will get little glimpses of it here and there. Will see how it plays out!
So confused with this story!!??
Wow! That was unexpected,what's with this "Shion" person? Whatever it is it's freaked out mum big time.
Sorry it should read *whoever *!