
meh, i don’t really feel it here. no chemistry between them, the plot is just meh. would’ve been better for the hat guy to be with the bottom, and the boring glass guy can take the blondie. (i don’t even remember their names)

YES. EXACTLY. THANK YOU. These two have zero chemistry and glasses guy is unbearable, he doesn’t feel like an actual character at all, more like a comic relief side dude who’s intentionally supposed to be one-note. Not really main character material at all. Now everything is going at rocket speed with the supposed confession. I’m kinda shocked actually, I usually like this author’s works but this one feels like a huge miss for me. It really is too bad. :/

i promise if it ends with this dumb boy getting in love with zerkin imma go personally to the author and take their pen or any device so they don’t ever think of creating shit like this.
it kinda reminds me of killing stalking, there’s this fcked up story, mental illness, toxic behaviours, rape, abuse, manipulation. just that here’s no purpose, no thrill, no action, it’s badly written and it seems like like the author just went wild with their dirty disgusting fantasy. that’s the only purpose if i had to mention one
ok the last pic suits perfectly, just wtf