when you confess your love and they think you are just acting. time to break out the heart omelet
when your love doesn't respond the way you want or expect them to. dude, he is not a mind reader, you got to tell him these things. he might just try to diminish such issues out of professional habit.
the over all message is decent. but the characters were .... odd to say the least. needs a bit of tweaking and it would be fine.
ummm. hmm, is there a story before this? because this feels like the ending or middle of a long story of stuff. that and i am interested in how they got together. it is decent, but i am not sure what the conflict is going to be.
oh my this is so silly but i love it so much. also get wrecked student Council president. you can't get rid of them if they are doing a play. even though they threw people.
dude, just confess that he is your mate and you two can get somewhere besides the twisting in the wind of does he love me?
best chapter for romance and chemistry between the two. still feels shallow and not earned. but at least there are moments in this chapter that shows stuff that would make it worth wild. however this chapter has our alpha acting out of character of what we know of him from the other chapters. if it was expressed that it was a false bravado or something maybe, but the differences are so weird. this story could work with some slight tweaking.
oh, damn, he got hurt because he thought of his love for a moment. hope he heals up fine.
so cute, and if they need him to have children as a king he can just have those whom can have babies get magically prego or have magic mpreg situation. there is also adoption.