Yahwi is rather disgusting with his nauseating behavior. I don't understand what he actually wants from Jooin, and it's annoying that he is tossing him around and being so forceful with his actions. I don't like him at this point, and honestly, after this chapter it will be hard to like him in the future.
I'm interested in how the author will turn this around. Yahwi will have to have some major character development with a tremendous amount of groveling for me to even think they should remotely be together. Otherwise, this story is easily going to fall apart with such an unlikable male lead.
I do want Ray to avenge his father who died an unjustly death. However, I want him to take his relationship with Ian seriously. That's the only thing that is bothering me. Once his plan succeeds and everything is over, hopefully, he will choose Ian and they can live happily. I hope nothing happens to Ian in the crossfire, but we know things haven't hit the fan quite yet.
I think he is not taking it lightly since he informed Ian from the start not to expect anything romantically. But well I too want him to complete his revenge. Actually his plan is something similar to what that Count did to his father, that is why he needs to marry the princess so that the court is in his favor when the time comes like it was in Count's favor when his father died. But well they end up together with the mix up of everything.
The revenge was savory. I did want it to last longer, but I'm quite pleased with how it turned out.
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This is such a fun story! Both leads are cute in their own way. I love their dynamic and it works. I like how Hikari is really gung ho about bottoming and it makes no difference to him who gets to top. Can't wait for the next update! ^^
I'm quite sad this is so short. I really like their dynamic, and I also like how Takaomi is very intimate with his hands. He stays touching Hinata by running his hands through his hair, pinching his nose, and caressing his cheek. I love all of those small gestures that he does to display his love for the other. It's little details like that, that makes me enjoy these stories.
The writing is not great, the plot is cliche, the characters are parodies, but for some odd reason, I really like this...It's hot, fun, and simply a good time. I like how into each other they are. Though the drama is trivial and so contrived, it doesn't take away from the entertainment. This may not be the best, but it's good in its own way.
Thank you for putting our feelings into words ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
These names dammit. Rui, Rio...I swear I've read them wrong at least 3 times jfc
Too much coronavirus on the brain. I thought that Codiva said Covid, jfc
All I know is, Raymond better not betray those people for his own revenge. That would be hypocritical and downright wrong. Hate begets hate, and vengeance begets vengeance. He will create another person like him if he were to betray them.