My guy gets assaulted on the regular, almost every chapter W for the Emperor, FUCK everyone else except Wu Ming(づ￣ ³￣)づ
I was upvoting, omg
Na bruh dun worry, it didn't register
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Again — WHAT THE FUCK?!?! THIS SHIT IS TRAUMATIZING
The last chapter saved all of us, the rest? Fuck it all.Σ( ￣□￣||)
This story is so GOOD! IT WAS WRITTEN SO WELL!! The plot, the characters, the writing is so good and worked so well the author gave his all in this story.
Y'all have read this story, you know the plot, and I know that for some of you, the darker it got it was harder for you to consume and that is OK! Cause that is the point of the story!
The way the story started wholesome you'd think it would go the route of enemies to lovers only to switch it up your head! Even I was fooled by the white haired guy. (I will not call him the ML bc he's EVIL AF.). Most of the time authors pull up the "I'm not actually the stalker, I'm secretly protecting you!" But This story doesn't do that, it straight up tells you that yeah, this mfucker is crazy.
Speaking of the white-haired guy, he is purely evil and his "backstory" wasn't put there so we could pity him but so we could understand the reason for his actions and HATE him even more! He's just pure evil, no excuses on that. The reveal of his twisted nature was executed so well. We as the reader was given glimpses and it made sense, his actions and everything paired with the art? Wow, it fits so well! The way his attraction, turned into obsession and want to possess shou-kun? It felt right. He's a well-written character we could shit on, never in the story did it feel like he suddenly switched-up. All his actions came together and made sense.
SHOU-KUUUUUUN!!! My lovely baby, I love him. He's such a well-written Main character. He doesn't know how to communicate properly, he turns to physical violence when pissed but he's got a strong sense of justice and he's kind. He's so easy to manipulate BECAUSE he's kind (and an air-head). He was traumatized and he is a character that learns, he does hate the psychotic guy but he's so kind that, although he doesn't forgive him, because of the white guys great acting he was fooled into pittying the guy and felt responsible for him even if he isn't supposed to feel that way because he's done nothing wrong, and he doesn't owe that shitty guy anything. Shou-kun is confident in his skills (little Neurodivergent guy) but he lacks confidence in himself as a whole, all because he was wronged in the past, he believes it was his fault and it stuck to him. Shou-kun is Kind with a strong sense of responsibility, that's why he keeps being dragged into the world of the white-hair psychotic guy. However, I do think he'd never land into that guys hand ever again.
THE CROSS DRESSER! (Can u tell I'm bad at names?) Mfucker is an enigma, is he what you call a cannonfodder? I see that term being used a lot but I don't know what it means lol. That guy is crazy, a grey area, the kind of guy that would help you but go "it ain't my problem so I'll just give you tips or whatever." But those tips are vague clues for shou-kun to try and process. I'm really not sure what his deal is and what he wants. He's not that nice either, I like him but also hate him, the kind of person I'd be plastic to when facing him and then talking shit about him somewhere else.
Accidentally pressed post but here we go(๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Special mentions to the plot devices:
I don't have a lot to say about the manager but he's hardworking and that you can tell he knows his employee's and cares for them.
The alleged "stalker", poor guy was already depressed and got sucked into the white guy's mind games. Was his actions excusable? No, but it is understandable, latching on to a person that reminds you of the person you love who died as a coping mechanism isn't a good thing. Good for him for admitting he was wrong, said sorry, and I imagine that he's finally getting the help he needs.
The other employee, he's a dick but he does learn his lesson in the end (albeit still being a dick), straight up homophobe but we like him don't we?
I've said this before but this is a well-written story. The plot, the characters, the writing we're all thought out and executed well. I don't know the author so I won't praise 'em as much, I still haven't read any of their stories other than this one. This story is disgusting and disturbing, but it's good.
I forgot to mention but I'm glad the psychotic guy didn't get a redemption and still suffers because he didn't change, he's still him and he's still set on possessing Shou-kun.
I found this through a vid with the title something along the lines of "boy marries a moomin"
The vid was made so hilariously that I started reading, and I'm absolutely in love with the characters ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
I'm really glad the uploader uploads in mass updates!!(づ￣ ³￣)づ
First time I've read a yandere manga and wasn't happy with the ending. The idea for the plot was good; the guilt tripping, stalking, controlling the other person. It really showed how toxic their relationship was, but I'm genuinely curious what went into the MC's head to fall for the guy who literally rapes him and controls his life? Crazy shit, I think it's the guilt and Stockholm syndrome that made him think he likes Isshin? And he's got this Adrien Agreste thing going on with following what his parents want, I also think he grew attached to Isshin bc he showed the attention the MC craved for? Still pretty shit tho.
The reveal of the ML's stalking didn't leave an impression, it wasn't that great of an execution. Everything didn't have a great execution. The lead up to the confinement part wasn't great, it reminded me of Color Recipe, except it was bad. Subtly showing the ML's obsession with the MC was fine, but the lead up to the "Climax" really wasn't great. Also, who just gets up after being put through that type of torture showing no sign of exhaustion? You know those NPC's in games? It felt like that.
The MC was likeable, the author was the one who killed him. We could have had an ending where he seperated himself from his parents' company and became happy with his life with he now has control over. It would have been great to see the ML regret his shit and learn his lesson, AND SUFFER, but no, we don't have that satisfaction I guess?
The premise of this story would have been great if it was left to cook more in the kitchen, or given more time to develop, everything felt rushed and empty.
Another case of "The plot is good, the writing/execution was bad."
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This is a great analysis, esp not just saying "r*pe and stalking is bad". I really like how you wrote this.
Thank you for thinking so! Doing this is kind of a hobby(๑•ㅂ•)و✧
I think this thing could have been given great writing like Color Recipe of only it was given more time and care. The plot genuinely had potential, it just wasn't given a chance
A great analysis of the whole story, this is what I honestly felt about the story. It was good at first, until the ML confined the MC, but he didn’t suffer any punishment for his actions and was left off with a hook. It could have honestly been better if the MC didn’t get with him but instead the 3rd member since they had so much chemistry
Right? But I do feel like him and the third member have more of a brotherly, friendly type of relationship than romantic. However, if the manga was given more time, I think I can see them being together. Honestly he was the only sane person in this manga ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
i'm currently on chapter 2 and the moment jun said isshin was controlling every aspect of him kanye just popped into my head. if it could happen irl it could definitely happen in fiction
IT'S UNFAIR! IT'S UNFAIR! THERE SHOULD BE MORE TO IT! WHAT DO YOU MEAN THAT'S IT?!?!?!? I LOVE ANTHOLOGIES BUT THIS IS JUST SO UNFAIR OH MY GOSH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE GIVE EVERY COUPLE IN HERE THEIR OWN FULL FLEDGE STORY IT'S SO UNFAIR Σ(っ°Д °;)っ(╯°Д °)╯╧╧ （/TДT)/
HOW DARE HE SAY THAT TO MC HE'S GOT NO FUCKIN EQ, I DUN CARE IF HE SAVED MC ANYMORE I'M GON' FUCK HIM UP MYSELF FOR SAYING THAT (╬￣皿￣)凸
THE FUCKING PUBLIC PROPOSAL, THEY'RE SO IN LOVE I FUCKING CAN'T MAN I CRIED SO HARD I FUCKING LOVE THEM （/TДT)/
I can't remember how many times I put down my phone because of pure satisfied shock. I LOVE IT, that's it. It's also sorta giving beast stars lolヾ(☆▽☆)