
For something titled Brutal, it's not as brutal as I thought/expect. Which is a tiny-little-bit a let down cos I keep wanting more brutality than what happened in the manga, I think the MC didn't give them enough pain...I want to see them suffer more and for a longer time...cos they sure deserve that :>

KInda bothers me how Jen & the gang didn't pick up the intense vibe between McQueen & Chang & instead insisted on staying, idk i think they should be able to pick that up given that they knew McQueen for so long (& the fact that he looked so pissed)

Yeah, it's a missed opportunity tbh...they could be a good supporting character esp. to give Ed some insights about McQueen and his work/company cos as for now Ed only had these insights from Ryan's pov (couldn't remember if Derek ever give one) which painted McQueen as this super asshole dude who'll ruin everything & everyone

The teeth is so distracting oml i need to know the reason for that design choice to put my mind at ease tbh lol
also it reminded me of the teeth of kids who eat too much candy...which is not a pleasant view irl...

kay i managed to reread it without focusing on the teeth & whoooa
mc IS a creepo....he kept (collecting) Akutagawa's used stuff and actually admitted to Akutagawa that he did creepy stuff to it like licking used chopstick while imagining Akutagawa's using it to eat like.....c'mon man :((
and i thought we'd passed those era of 'i'm not into men but i'm into you and you happen to be a man' as if subtly saying that being gay is a negative statement....idk his phrasing irked me, the mangaka could choose a better phrasing for him tbh but eh it's spilled milk so nothing can be done i guess...

Lol i didn't notice it was from the author of Coexistence until i read the first ch & saw the drawing (the cover didn't hint me at all).
Now the drawing here is better i think and I do REALLLLLY hope the author also leveled up on how they compose a story. Cos if it's something like Coexistence I cannot for the life of me my lawd suffer that type of poison again
h m m m m m...........
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